"valium"

[evolxbluxheven]

make a bargain, make a trade
plastic smiles, plastic blades
healed to death, sick of you
lie to me, i'll be true
indepth reason, same excuse
tie the knot, i'll tie the noose
bliss in wing, sleep to the view
save the worthy, burn a few
light inside, i'm afraid
close the doors, blind the shades
go away, i'll go too
stay right here, i'll stay to
burning candle, light the fuse
falling down, rope to loose
train the old, all to new
burn the wealthy, save a few
tell me whacha think

 

[evolxbluxheven]

ill give it 2 more days...then its edit time! =P

 

[harraser]

I like

 

[E-girl]

that's weird... i thought i replied to this a few days ago. oh well. maybe i just read it and meant to go back.
kinda morbid... but nice rhyming scheme. nice work

 

[plazma]

Hell, this is one nicely stated poem.
As has been said before, the rhyming scheme goes damn well with the downright dark subject matter.
I really do enjoy reading dark stuff for some reason, great work.
-plaz out-