unfinished

[mr_fluffy]

this thread of *SWeeT-e*'s reminded me of this piece. it's a somewhat wistful look at the boy i was, and how far i've come to be the man that i am today. there were many more stanzas, but it ended up going nowhere, so i abandoned it. however, i'm quite happy with these three, so i thought i'd post them up.

-fluffy-


all my wounds are self-inflicted
for all my life i've been protected
cared for, nurtured and encouraged
by myself only disparaged

loving others i did well
loving myself could go to hell
my past containing only failures
my future bleak, my present endless

...

this place in detail did i know
it's musty halls i'd ever roam
this house of cards i had constructed
let myself be self-destructive

...

 

[bisKi]

I've been through that in a way, but at this time not anymore

the future's just merely unknown, not bleak *hugs*
like this, sharp but nice.