swimming (lullaby II)

[vurtomatic]

in
murky depths adream
a breath whispery away
trailing candles
watchful lights
voices (surround
around round echo
round around
surround) enwrap
whispers from the depths
of night's blanket
sink me on a journey
into murky depths
of
[ 04 March 2003: Message edited by: vurtomatic ]

 

[bluegirl]

when i first read the title i thought it said "swimmingly" - and that's actually how i kind of read this piece.... i LOVE the form - i think that's always one of the strongest elements of your writing,
bk

 

[ice-9]

agreed!
:D