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zero9zero

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this one kinna has a weird thing workin. i like it though, it's probably one of the strongest things i've ever written
-Dave
One look at you shows there's no reason for you to keep living.
Because your life is built on and supported by lies, half truths and excuses for mistakes
You can't come to grips with. And your faith won't save you or lift you back
Up, because you'll never believe in what is right. You'll never comprehend the truth. Hold tight to your fale prophecies and follow
Your leader to battle in a war that noone is
Fit to fight. It is nothing but a fucking
Lie supported by years and years of stories
And contradictions. Stand behind the shield
Of your book that serves no purpose but to Contradict, holding you back from living and Learning. Stand behind your mighty faith, And I'll stand behind mine. Because mine is That of honesty, truth, thinking for yourself
And living through the wisdom of your own mind. Letting the landmines of life take their toll in building your own person, capable of thinking clearly with good
Conscience, not clouded by the disapproving
Eyes of so many other weak minded, hearless
Souls, who's only purpose is to create a
Roadblock that you can never pass.
You'll never free yourself to take life one
Step at a time, and learning that the truth
Is sometimes deceiving when it has 2000 years
To hide it's mistakes and faults. Go on, on
Your so-call righteous path to salvation and
Live each day in degredation of who you are.
Keep chasing those rainbows that lead to
Nothing but questions and lies. Just remember
You'll find me on the path few ever take
To learn with each day that passes that you
Are your best friend and worst enemy and your
Own salvation. Something noone can preach to
You, and no book can ever teach you.
[This message has been edited by zero9zero (edited 10 July 2000).]
 
Definately Powerful. Very very powerful and VERY VERY descriptive and perceptive of probably, a person looking for love in the wrong places through foolish games. Sad when you luv such peeps and they aren't willing to walk on truth.
Luvs,
-Amina
 
Very powerful indeed. This reminds me of someone who is having problems with a best friend after telling one lie too many. Amazing how life works sometimes.
 
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