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Track 1 is good as shit.

Track 2 is strong Lil Peep vibes, I like.

Track 3 didnt really impress me.

Overall: I like your songs but your vocals should be remixed.
 
You're making improvements.

Keep experimenting with melodies and don't be afraid to use a wide range of vocals on a single track. Change it up a bit not just from song to song, but from within the song. It can make your songs pop with color if you try using your full range of vocals from verse to chorus.
 
yeah, i would also try to variate the vocals a bit. the rest is good as it is.
 
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