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bc

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i wrote this, after staring too long and too hard at a beautiful girl, and catching one of those glimpses, a brief moment of eye contact, that left me indecisive as to whether i should run over and kiss her in the middle of class, look away, or get weak in the knees and wet myself
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oh, and you'll have to pardon the cheese, but it really was a cheesy moment for me.
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"You are SO hot."
And I sat this,
copping the best macho Boston Colleg guy voice
I can possibly muster.
But that's not me,
and that's definitely not you,
so let me
break
it
down
for you.
You, are an exquisite creature
you posess physical traits
very attune to mine eye
something quite magical
enchanting
dances in your eyes
hiding behind the lenses of your glasses
i can see it.
every time your gaze falls
in my direction
my heart reacts - an involuntary flutter
and i'm a bit embarassed
unsure
to look back?
or turn away and pretend to be learning...
and pretend,
is really all i can do
because in your presence
my thoughts
and eyes
inevitably wander back to you
and perhaps
the most tantalizing
amazing part
that holds me like a man in bondage
every time your mouth opens
delicate pursed lips parting,
and sweet, like honey
with that soft
exciting
melodic accent
not only does it sing a sweet tune
but the substance of your song
speaks volumes
it is a song of insight
articulating intelligence
so effortlessly
so delicately
how can one not be enraptured?
so...
i sit
i stare
i listen
rapt in you
by you
bc
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bc-
**Proud to be an Official member of the Stuck-Up/8-Up Crew**
"Fuck PLUR! it's all about hardcore ass fucking!!"
We'll make great pets...
 
ohhh my,,, not cheesy at all it was wonderful,
Passion is stil alive today.
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Just takes one angel to change a life
~~~~CHERUB~~~~
Aka: Mommyhen
~I still belive in your eyes~-Gigi D'Agostino
 
wow...
passion...romance, alive and well..
at least in my fave boy jared's head...
it was beautiful babe
i miss u
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satori shalom
 
awww.. i liked that one so much ..
[This message has been edited by poezante (edited 30 November 2000).]
 
man, that was everything i've wanted to say to every crush and couldn't muster out. thank you...
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thank you guys
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i was just struck in class. as a result, i have no idea what the first two Meditations of discourse (descartes) are about. oh well.
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from the sounds of my poem...should i go for it???
bc
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bc-
**Proud to be an Official member of the Stuck-Up/8-Up Crew**
"Fuck PLUR! it's all about hardcore ass fucking!!"
We'll make great pets...
 
Wow, you just gave me hope that there's actually guys like you still left!!!! I found this piece to be extremely romantic, but not in a mushy-make-me-gag kind of way. I suppose I find it sexy. Maybe I'm just weird. However, I know that if a guy ever said this or sent this to me, I'd absolutely die. Its very flattering to the girl, and I really think you should do something about it. Maybe not kiss her in class, but definately something. I'm sure that if she inspired you to write this, she's well worth the effort. Just do it. And keep writing.
-Kristen
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~~~This is my church.. this is where I heal my hurts.. for tonight, God is a DJ~~~
 
::sits speachless staring at the screen::
yeah... go for it, i think things'll work out
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Mellabopper
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~*~*~ meat is no treat for those you eat ~*~*~
animals are for petting!
 
teehee.
this kid is once again content.
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bc
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bc-
**Proud to be an Official member of the Stuck-Up/8-Up Crew**
"Fuck PLUR! it's all about hardcore ass fucking!!"
We'll make great pets...
 
as is this one
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Mellabopper
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~*~*~ meat is no treat for those you eat ~*~*~
animals are for petting!
 
You are extremely articulate.
I wish I was her, in the sense that I would shiver to know that someone had written such a poem a propos de moi. ~grin~
I loved your style as well.
Wonderful....
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~the *secret* does not necessarily have to remain enigmatic~
(just ask (and open your eyes))
"Beauty is truth," -Keats
 
she did shiver... and her jaw dropped about twenty feet... and her knees refused to keep working and she practially turned into a large pile of mush on the ground that morning she read it...
but she's had a smile on her face ever since
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Mella
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~*~*~ meat is no treat for those you eat ~*~*~
animals are for petting!
"does anyone know where we are? because i think i dont have a clue"
 
Mellabopper:
Ohhhhh, you lucky bitch.
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Just teasing. That is absolutely wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm jealous. ~jk~
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"I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy every minute of it."
~~Anon~~
 
heh... i'm still trying to figure out exactly how i managed to catch the eye of someone so amazing....
i guess i'll never know...
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Mellabopper
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~*~*~ meat is no treat for those you eat ~*~*~
animals are for petting!
"does anyone know where we are? because i think i dont have a clue"
 
Hey, uh...Mella? In order to find the answer to your question, I would read said poem a couple of times. I think that should provide a pretty good answer.
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I wish you two the best of luck, even though I don't know either of you(obviously...ha!). From both of your posts on this board, I gather that you must be a truly amazing pair!
Congrats.........
 
time will tell.
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bc
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bc-
**Proud to be an Official member of the Stuck-Up/8-Up Crew**
"Fuck PLUR! it's all about hardcore ass fucking!!"
We'll make great pets...
"drug suppliers, typically wearing 'Ecko' brand sweat shirts shuffle around the dance floor, chanting softly, 'want some pills? k?'" - Shu Shin Luh, The Chicago Sun-Times
 
Mellabopper-
Just read it... absolutely amazing... best of luck to both of you!
~*~Angeleyz~*~
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Angels descending, bring from above,
Echoes of mercy, whispers of love.
 
aww, that was such a sweet, beautiful poem! and i usually don't like romantic-type poems - but that seemed to capture your feelings at the moment so well. something most people can relate to, and written so well!
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~po
"she said it's so funny how life burns out so fast, it's just another wasted day."
 
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