roxicodone

[n3wt]

Hey,

I thought I'd just keep posting up songs I'd written.


http://youtu.be/1zaDIn4LzmE

roxicodone

the drugs come on slow
and she's feeling
tired and alone
a shiver runs up her bones
she waits for the glow
the drugs come on slow

she smokes a cigarette
lingers a while in regret
desperate to buy back some time
though she hasn't a dime
she hopes her age doesn't show
the drugs come on slow

the day it treads on a wire
the darkness conspires
she shivers perspires
as the daylight expires
and the shadows they grow
the drugs come on slow

and there's a knock on her door
family can be such a chore
but mum doesn't rise
no there's no life in her eyes
her daughter turns and she goes
the drugs come on slow

 

[herbavore]

sounds great! --good job with the video. Your inflection adds a lot.

 

[n3wt]

Thanks.

I'm pretty fucking shy most of the time, so it's hard for me to put myself out there like that.

So thanks, it's nice to hear what someone thought.

 

[DroneLore]

You have a sweet ass voice dude. Keep it up.

 

[n3wt]

Thanks man.

 

[n3wt]

I'm not sure if I'm allowed to revive my own thread, but I wanted to say a couple of things.

1. I've been calling this song "The Morphine Addict" lately because I think that title has more of a timeless quality to it,
and I'm curious what people here think of that.

and

2. I've been playing live and getting a good response and I'm recording an EP and none of that would've happened if I hadn't
gotten a good response on this and other songs from people on this board, so thank you to everyone who took the time to listen.

 

[ForEverAfter]

1. Roxicodode is a much better title. "Addict" is too generic.

2. You're welcome.

3. Nice to see you back, n3wt.