Ok so im feeling a lil mushy today and wrote a poem for the girl im seeing. havent wrote a poem for someone in a long time lol. granted its not really a poem of certain form imo.
Whats ur guys opinion of it? too cheesy to lame to retarded?
anywho here it goes.
From one life to the next.
Two strangers will meet.
Some say its chance, destiny, or even Aphrodite guiding these two lovers to a limitless fate.
For one gaze into each others eyes reveal they are bound to entwine, collide, radiate an indescribable love so deep.
For when these two lovers meet any and all boundaries are shattered.
What they experience is not of the physical sense.
It is a revelation of the mind and body.
So pure is the experience of two souls becoming as one.
It exceeds all love stories ever told.
Not even Cleopatra and Mark Antony hold a flame to passion I carry, For my Nia, My queen, My beautiful stranger.
Whats ur guys opinion of it? too cheesy to lame to retarded?
anywho here it goes.
From one life to the next.
Two strangers will meet.
Some say its chance, destiny, or even Aphrodite guiding these two lovers to a limitless fate.
For one gaze into each others eyes reveal they are bound to entwine, collide, radiate an indescribable love so deep.
For when these two lovers meet any and all boundaries are shattered.
What they experience is not of the physical sense.
It is a revelation of the mind and body.
So pure is the experience of two souls becoming as one.
It exceeds all love stories ever told.
Not even Cleopatra and Mark Antony hold a flame to passion I carry, For my Nia, My queen, My beautiful stranger.
