.:red-candle-wax:.

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

RED-CANDLE-WAX

:RED-CANDLE-WAX:.

She runs a darkened finger
Across the milky skies
She screams and bites mysterious
Through blackened silt-filled lies.

She strokes her heart
A length of twine
Wrapped up to fill forever.

She bows her head
No need to tread
This lightening, spark filled fire.

 

[asmodeus256]

pictures inside you
heartfire beats through the void
beauty is the end

 

[Dandy]

Re: RED-CANDLE-WAX

She strokes her heart
A length of twine
Wrapped up to fill forever.

The entire piece is:
beautifully mysterious
Though I felt the above stanza was graphical (in a good way - it feels 'smooth')
the piece is intricate and you gave me a lot of freedom to play with this.

 

[up all night]

^ Yeah I was going to quote that bit. You seem like such an interesting person hon and I would really like to meet you.

 

[Shnouzerpuff]

though I am not entirely sure I get the right meaning...

I like the clear image I get each paragraph. Like a photo in my head of the scene being described.

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

Thank-you, everyone.

Guys, dw about whatever meaning you take from my pieces..
I'm the first to admit they're hard to access, and a lot of the time the true meanings are so finely ingrained it can be hard for even myself to understand or recognise them.

I'm glad you all took something from this piece.

 

[cherub]

definately a fonder piece I like from you, the mysterious and the imagination you put through with the reader works well.

 

[beanpoophead]

i like this

its dark, deep, myseterious. it draws me in - makes me feeling something.

 

[RareForm]

this is astounding, this is one of your best pieces.