Pollenate

[zero9zero]

this really isn't poetry i don't think.. i dunno..i guess it could be. just found this laying in my binder while i'm here at the studio on lunch break.
dave
All I could do was sit there
And try not to look at you
With pain flowing from my eyes
Cascading to the cement
That seemed to be lying on top of me
I hadn't the strength to even
Ask how or why
Thoughts ran rabid through my mind
And spun me furiously into
A deeper void of confusion and turmoil
Your stoic expression became
The image of all my fears
And the source of this hatred
I still cannot escape
You took everything I had
Worked so hard to gain
And the bond him and I had formed
Into your hands..
And you fucking tore it apart
Wadded up, thrown to burn in the fire
Smodlering ash, next to my charred heart
And you..
And you expect me to act like nothing
Like nothing happened?
And that you were the fucking victim?
You can't even look into my eyes
But I can watch you run this sick game
Again and again..
With the reassurance that nothing
Will ever catch up to you
I'm fucking begging you..
Look at me
Look at me and face the reality
That will always haunt you
I am your fucking hell
And I fucking hate you
I fucking hate you

 

[Noodle]

whoa...

 

[CARESS]

Dave,
Yes, this is poetry. Poetry doesn't have to be organized, happy, or rhyme. This is a piece full of pain and anger, but still worthy of being called art.
I am assuming that this was left for you by another person...
I am sorry that they feel this way. I wince at their pain. But I also thank you for posting and sharing something most recipients would have tossed in the trash. I regret that you were the object of such a piece..but if you can look past the "fuck you's", it is obvious that this person wants you to recognize their feelings....sometimes we all want this, whether the feelings are justified or not. How you proceed from here is a decision only you can make.
Thank you again. Hope you have a peaceful weekend. Thank you for sticking around here with us in Words.

Hugs,
Caress

 

[zero9zero]

Actually..
I wrote this with the intention of sending it to someone, I just haven't gotten the courage to do so yet. Plus the possibility of lawsuits (I'm pretty mean in there) etc.. What made you think someone sent this to me?
:-(
I'm not THAT MEAN
Dave

 

[Righty]

...Well...in the sense that it caused the reader (me) to feel your aggression as i read the poem, i would call it a good poem. Good poems dont always need to be nice Just, take some st. john's wart next time you think yer gonna write one of those, maybe that will help good job tho...and also good idea as to not sending it to that person, i know if that were sent to me, i'd begin to cry. O well....become a poet, and be a little more optimistic in such poems
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Expect everything and the unexpected shall never happen.

 

[CARESS]

Sorry Zero,
I proceeded on the assumption that someone else had written it based on your comment that you had just "found" it laying in your binder. My mistake...We all know what assuming does. And it seems I'm the "ass" in this instance
However no matter the author or intended recipient, I still feel the comments I made are valid...How you proceed from here is totally up to you.
Caress