poem... tell me what you think

[Shady Kaity]

ill swallow you whole as if your my favorite pill,

stick in my throat and make me ill

consuming you, you consume me.

Mutiny over my body

fill me up and take me over

fill me up, im getting colder.

I'd never give you up, forever by my side.



blind my feelings, numb my flaws

take me away, im only okay when your inside me.

oblivious to reality, my perfect fucking fantasy.



I need you

I'm only okay when your inside me

I need you

Keep me lost in ecstasy

I need you

To help me mend my broken pieces



Crazy in love, snapping madly in hate

yanking and pulling emotional gates.

Hating to love you, battling my own brain.

I keep you comfortably distant,

Fearful of getting to close.

Heart and soul trapped in barbed wire

Love so intense raging like fire.

S&M, kinky sex, love you most, pain at its best.

Whats joy without pain,

bullshit fighting,

so goddamn inane.



Blind my feelings, numb my flaws

Take me away, i'm only okay when your inside me.

Oblivious to reality, my perfect fucking fantasy.



I need you

I'm only okay when you're inside me

I need you

To keep me ( keep me ) lost in ecstasy

I need you

Help me mend my broken pieces ( broken fucking pieces )



Fix this mess of a girl,

Take me to your fucking world.

 

[CoffeeDrinker]

What kind of music do you envision behind this as you scream it out on the street corner? I think this does a great job of getting across what you want to get across. Unless you are trying to tell people that you are a prude completely comfortable in her own skin, then you completely missed the boat on that one. Sorry to say.
It's made even better by the fact that I'm listening to "Everything is Broken" as I read it. Good timing Shady Kitty

 

[Shady Kaity]

thank you very much...im not sure what i envision behind it...i wrote it for my boyfriend kind of a love/sexual innuendo/my own fears and self hatred song. hes the one who plays the instruments i just write lyrics occassionally...i think i definitely envision something a little harder to be played behind this