Paradise Lost

[zero9zero]

This is my first actual REAL attempt on here (with proper formatting, cheesy rhyme pattern etc)
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Paradise Lost
Inside me there seems to be
an evil trapped for eternity
Fallen low so it cannot show
All the pain and hate I want
to know
It comes today then runs away
Where it goes I cannot say
But when I yearn it will return
And in the flames of hell you
will burn
Retribution, holding me down
There is no soultion
No intent, taught in the past
to repent
Childhood fiction, ignored
before but now an addiction
Misbehaved, free to choose
But now it seems, I'm enslaved
Yesterday lie so far behind
In a lace of blood forgotten
My sanity lies in pools of tears
Deafened but I can hear the
Voice of my consciousness
Conformed
Darkness as bright as the sun
Shines into my eyes
Relentless, to drive away the
beast, but the evil never dies
Endless pain, it's all the same,
Composure regained, paradise maintained
Hear the call, the price too small
to face your fears as the ending nears
The innocent forced to bleed
The guilty freed
A funeral procession another
Confession
To steal and to lie, to live
and to die
When it evens the cost
Paradise lost

 

[trancesetter21]

That was beautiful Dave... this is Kelly. I met you at Revo. on Monday. so sorry i didn't get to talk much... you cought me at a bad time. Hope to party with ya again...PEACE!
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"We all have our heads in the gutter, but some of us are looking toward the stars." -Oscar Wilde

 

[MizzWorld]

the poem was deep, and it showed a lot of emotion. it was well written, id like to see more of your poems on here

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Tear your wings off at the spine and tape them to the back of mine