Never go Back..just go.

[writnpage]

I am living on a dream
There's nothing left for me to show
You have changed so much my friend
You are a woman I do not know.
I have seen the burning in your eyes
For I have placed it there
There will be no place for you to hide.
And now that this person has arrived
I will ask you to take care..
is there room for me inside
Now that you are truly free?
And can we talk now as friends wuld
Or is there something I should not see?
Or should I leave and fade away
And be the burden you will not bear?
I never understood your night-time patterns
Or the woman who lives within now
I know we'll never meet again
But I'll keep in touch somehow.
And I hope you still remember me
For I see you everywhere....

 

[poezante]

amina,
u know i really love this one.. it brought me tears... i completely empathsized with this one.. great! simply fantastic..
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rebecca

 

[cherub]

writn,
I love your work, it is very touching you have a very old soul. thanks for letting us take a look into it.
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Just takes one angel to change a life
~~~~CHERUB~~~~
Aka: Mommyhen

 

[Yoyi]

Writn...since you dont reply to me otherwise...get on a plane and come to Florida!!

 

[writnpage]

OMG Cherub, Poe, Yoyi, thank you all for your sweet sweet compliments. My love poems are always so monotonous and mundane sounding since so many people before me have already expressed my thoughts in so much better ways..and yet you all make me feel refreshed in my own old emotions.
Thanks for the encouragement.
Cherub, you've been a great source of beauty lately.
Yoyi, I cannot begin to express my gratitude for lifting me up to such high spirits by your sweet sweet compliments and love and warmth lately. It makes me wake up extremely happy.
Thank you all

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Mwwwwwwah
Luvs,
-Amina

 

[PixieGirl]

I never knew you had such a talent! You writings are excellent, I only wish I had this ability.
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"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you."
-Winnie the Pooh

 

[writnpage]

You SILLY WILLY PIXIE GIRLIE!!! You HAVE a beautiful personality and an even more gorgeous face..which to me shows what's inside. I'm sure if you pick up a pen and paper (which you probably have already) and write, it will be magical. Post something soon!!!
Luvs,
-Amina
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"Like a bird on a wire, Like a drunk in a midnight choir, I have tried in my way to be free" - Leonard Cohen