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Nasty Breakup Poem

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Neptune

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I'm so alone.
This hurt won't leave my chest love, no matter how I try,
The feeling comes in waves, riding on a memory, and I cry.
I dream of you.

We said goodbye today, threw up our best fronts, but your eyes don't lie, my love.
God, I miss you, and there's a hole inside me that you filled for so long. Fuck.
Guess through all those days we never really saw it coming,
Maybe we just ran out of luck.

I take a deep breath to ease the pain, and re-live a sweet memory, It kills me.
Know it will get better but I'm not for sure, this feeling is like there's gonna be no cure.
Hole in my soul and I need you in it, I've hated this unfair motherfucker from damn near start to finish.
You're a part of me that I can never erase, part of a perfect dream I'll never be able to chase.
Miss you so much my hearts' got to be bleeding and I've got to find a way to cope.

Wait, what the fuck?
Whats that? Hell no, this has got to be a joke.
Bitch you're gonna run off with him the next day while I'm here sick and broke?
Fuck that and fuck you, now I hope you slip on some fresh doggie doo,
and bust your fucking skull open on a stump. Bitch.
 
yep that's pretty nasty.

probably more suited to words. the home of poems both happy nasty n sad

Jj
 
love it. all those emotions tumbling around inside you. regret, confusion, anger, hate. i like this piece, good snap-shot of the turmoil that breaking-up inflicts upon us.
 
Neptune said:
I'm so alone.
This hurt won't leave my chest love, no matter how I try,
The feeling comes in waves, riding on a memory, and I cry.
I dream of you.

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I take a deep breath to ease the pain, and re-live a sweet memory, It kills me.
Know it will get better but I'm not for sure, this feeling is like there's gonna be no cure.
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*hugs* i feel the heart ache in this...and the pain :( the feelings are so well worded. a great peice that revealed such emotion and pain.
 
God I know *exactly* how you feel right now.

There should some rule saying you have to wait a certain period of time (proportional to the time you spent in the relationship) after a break-up before jumping into bed with someone new...out of respect for your previous partner and what they're probably going through right now. My ex waited all of 4 days, if that. It's like a knife through your heart, isn't it. Great poem. :)

*~*kimmy*~*
 
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