Motherfucker(s).

[Dandy]

Feet ambulate –
And for every green light –
Ten red follow.
And for every faded and tired whisper,
An angel dies and leaves behind a swollen shadow.
And though the writing was on the wall from the second you took a glimpse –
It is the passion for what remains to be embarked upon that fuels the fire,
Enough to astonish even the smallest person to walk away after being hit –
And the biggest enough to press fingers firmly in faces in the name of desire.
Even at times though it seems like living with the cards you’re dealt is living with honour –
Other times it is enough to feel discarded and untouched much sooner –
And though I say and do things without knowing how much they hurt,
I realise in a matter of seconds and would rather see your left eye-socket seeming against –
the visceral earth.
And for every broken bone and superficial train of thought –
I glare at a desolate sky and deem the clouds redundant,
Togetherness remains false but we still remain on course,
without each other we exist, but we don’t live, though at all times -
not at all relevant.


The End. .

 

[neverwas]

Togetherness remains false but we still remain on course,
without each other we exist, but we don’t live, though at all times -
not at all relevant.

..... wow. your writting is amazing. you write with such raw feelings that just made me feel like it got a knife and twisted it in my heart.


luv ya hun

 

[Dandy]

Something along what you described was my desired response,
Thank-You.

 

[neverwas]

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

Originally posted by Dandy
And for every faded and tired whisper,
An angel dies and leaves behind a swollen shadow.

^It really feels like you've been able to somewhat let go in this amazing piece.

I read it, and stared, as is the response to every powerful, raw, gut wrenching, hurt lifting and holding and embracing pieces you have written.

You move me in so many ways.

 

[nickthecheese]

powerful stuff

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

It is the passion for what remains to be embarked upon that fuels the fire

Wow! That line strikes me!

 

[katmeow]

I glare at a desolate sky and deem the clouds redundant,
Togetherness remains false but we still remain on course,
without each other we exist, but we don’t live

I've really enjoyed reading the last two pieces you've posted. This is great work. That last part really captures me... has a 'with or without you' kinda feel about it.

Feet ambulate –
And for every green light –
Ten red follow.

Aint that the way life goes some days!

Great work

 

[Dandy]

Thank-you to everyone for their kind words. It is really rewarding to have people read work - makes me smile. .