let the river take you

[vurtomatic]

afloat, along
you go, let go
just let go
let the river take you
where you belong
where it may be
you will be
just let go
dont be sad, silly girl
let it out, your heart
fluttering trapped
so beautiful in your sorrow
brush aside, your hair
limp as your spirit
wipe your nose, all red
and wet, sniffing
starry-eyed girl, rest
rest and be at peace
close your eyes, breathe
afloat, along
you go, let go
just let go
let the river take you
where you belong
where it may be
you will be
just let go
to a friend who had a rough new year's eve

 

[plazma]

I keep opening this, meaning to post something, and then leaving without saying anything. I've done it about 5 times in the past hour. I am absolutely stumped for what to say.
Vurt, to say you have a way with words is an understatement. I really hope I can meet the guy behind the keyboard sometime.
-plaz out-

 

[katmeow]

Just reading thru some old words posts...

This one touched me today (as your writing often does vurt).

Beautiful

 

[neverwas]

just let go
dont be sad, silly girl
let it out, your heart
fluttering trapped
so beautiful in your sorrow

rest
rest and be at peace
close your eyes, breathe

this was amazing to read...much like plaz i was left tryin to word what i wanted to say.

vurt my love ur writting has but one purpose...everything u write touches someone. be it one person or more ur writting always has thislil bit in it that knows whoit has to recah out to

this peice was nothing short of amazing. wish i had of seen it earlier.

 

[neverwas]

just let go
dont be sad, silly girl
let it out, your heart
fluttering trapped
so beautiful in your sorrow

rest
rest and be at peace
close your eyes, breathe

this was amazing to read...much like plaz i was left tryin to word what i wanted to say.

vurt my love ur writting has but one purpose...everything u write touches someone. be it one person or more ur writting always has thislil bit in it that knows whoit has to recah out to

this peice was nothing short of amazing. wish i had of seen it earlier.

 

[vurtomatic]

thank you, i really, really, really appreciate this.

 

[CrimsonQueen]

I love your poems...it's really great the way you use two or three words in each line...and the effect and sound of that is so pleasantly rhythmatic...

 

[vurtomatic]

cq... havent heard from u for ages, what a pleasant surprise