he's gone

[BrightEyesIsMe]

today was one of happiness
but then i heard your tone
not of good laughter
but of doubt and fear

i wanted to know why
you could not speak
you tumbled and fumbled
the words slowly came

is this for the best or for the worst
if i love you i should let you go
and if you love me back you will return
so they say

i hurt so bad right now
my eyes red and blurry
my heart frozen
why did you hurt me

i need someone to help me
i am losing my mind
going to a place of insanity
to a place of no love

your love made me
i was whole
i was happy
life was like a blossom

and now that you are gone
the petals fall from this bloom
it hurts and the layers fall away
slowly

come back to me my dear love
i miss you
i want you
hold me please

later i know i will look back
and laugh at these words
but that will be
because i grew

forms of aganizing spicies
feather about me
picking my wounds
they once posed as friends

what did i do wrong?
do i deserve this?

 

[beanpoophead]

ah i cant even tell you how much easier it EVENTUALLY gets. i was so broken hearted, so hurt, so lost after me and the ex broke up, but each day brings a new smile.

writing (and a good friend!) was pretty much the only thing that got me through.

this is a good piece, it really expresses truth and reality. i like that

 

[neverwas]

what did i do wrong?
do i deserve this?

your writting is both pure and innocent...i hope the sadness that comes through this peice gets easier as time goes along. *hugs*

 

[cherub]

Cliche's never work for me so i won't try and pass one over on you. You will work it out in time with yourself but just know you have people to help you through.

and keep writting

 

[RareForm]

this isn't so anymore I hear.