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hey...u are ain't got such angle like me...u got urs...i and tell u...there is something....what means very good?U got ur style 👍....and reminds me a mellody
 
Nas47 said:
hey...u are ain't got such angle like me...u got urs...i and tell u...there is something....what means very good?U got ur style 👍....and reminds me a mellody
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No offence

it won't get published like this
- some are just notes
- some are crap (prison pub is just 2 sentences)
 
relex_author said:
No offence

it won't get published like this
- some are just notes
- some are crap (prison pub is just 2 sentences)
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ye right u must editing...choose the best and get out some or get in something.....through ur eyes...and then go to medias,papers,publishers and others...it will cost u and some money too may be....but it's worth tryin' it
 
Nas47 said:
ye right u must editing...choose the best and get out some or get in something.....through ur eyes...and then go to medias,papers,publishers and others...it will cost u and some money too may be....but it's worth tryin' it
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So I could get co-writers, a publisher, maybe even I could self publish. But I might not.
 
THE TYPIST
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- a computer, a screen
- the typist flows
- he makes errors
- he types uncontrollably
- he often types at speed
- he constantly makes a mess
- in the meantime, a bowl of goo (semen) is cooked and a new house designed and built - to his new specification, of course
- he cooks it
- he defines a simple standard of living which includes "I will not be here"
- his diet in the first house is auto-soup which is very healthy
- the new goo is the diet for the second house

[TYPED]
Rule 1 - I don't want to eat goo! No rulebook.
 
EVIL WALL
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- a large black wall
- there's a plain view into the distance - no sunset - just a plain horizon
- it talks
- it spits
- the boy and the wall are on a ledge
- there are graphics on the wall, maybe some large faces which have mouths
- "Don't go to that end" the wall says
- he walks down
- he receives a short electric shock in his leg
- there

"Don't go to that end" says the first face which is high and at the start of the wall.

"Why not?" the boy asks.

"A wall is there."

He walks down and receives the shock - he knows it's the wall because of a psychic vibe. He sees a face near him which is low down.

"I am here. You want power I want more power than you" the second face says.

The faces talk until the end of time.
 
HELL HORSE
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Fast ninja horse. It has 10 legs. It has hands instead of feet. These can pick things up and are mainly used for throwing things ie. spears. It often has a helmet. It is a man.

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SAND DESERT
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A desert contained in a huge glass pyramid. You don't know it's glass initially - you find out after a lot a walking and fighting. The wind is strong in the centre but weak at the edge. The structure may well be several hundred miles wide. Features typical desert animals such as scorpions and bugs.

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LYRE
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A huge metal instrument made of metal (structure with blades and a sort of fan.) He's standing near it - he thinks he's going to get shredded. He's scared. He starts dancing (walking moves) to satisfy the machine.

"Do you know the history of this machine?" - a voice

Other beings are near the machine too. They automatically start walking into the machine on purpose - to be funny. They get shredded! He sees their suffering. He has a cry.

"Who is he?"
"He's very famous."

When they go through the blades they kind of explode - the machine is magic!

A large one uses it last - they call him "GOD." He gets more hurt than the others.

They all hurt for a long time. At the end when they recover they have big smiling faces and wear white.

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FETISH DUNGEON
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- very dark including the walls
- very sexy smell
- noises
- things on stands (2 penises touching etc)
- there's a black balloon which bashes repeatedly on the ceiling - it uses levitation
- like a museum
- light at the front, dark at the back
- there are men in there
- all the machinery at the back is hot
- men in ovens looking out + often looking in
- also boys and trolls, they're horrible
- they may poo/wee
- may run
- may be dirty
- may whoop
- may inhale farts
- the room is square
- the walls/floor/ceiling are flat
- it's a large camp/fortress/dungeon
- they like roasting and pickling babies
- all sorts of men including a monkey man
- "I want a baby - I go and pick up my own"
- they like making fires
- hidden under some trees, made of stone
- no smoke
- hallucination
 
THE BUTTERFLY
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- an evil god
- about the size of a man
- deep purple with black outline
- a bit like Batman
- steals people and flies off with them
- isn't stealthy
- might break one of his wings off and drop it on a building - then he can't fly steady
- when standing he might uncurl one of his eyeball stalks and say "look how evil I am"
- churches, buildings, streets, in fact a large town - in medieval style
- are there people there? Yes, some. It's a strange place

The crowd are pretending not to be staring.

"Oh - it just goes" one man says to a child. The butterfly is in a lot of pain.

The crowd are acting scared which means they are enjoying the show. They are evil.

ALSO...
He starts as a large piece of metal in a bay on a spaceship run by dwarves. He's allowed to do the drop. After the drop he changes form to a long needle shape - then grows wings. He risks becoming a nerve (infinite pain) but may reappear on the ship.
 
THE SERAPH
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Seraphs like heat, and they like pain a lot. A style of demon. It puts large fires right outside its home. It's not social. It may jump from its house onto a fire - or just walk outside and onto a fire - for fun. Will arrange the fires in a maze style. This is in case something like a mouse walks in. Then it will jump on a fire. The maze style makes it hard for the mouse to leave. Seraphs do this for fun - they might have a bit of a dance too.

- house made of wood
- it's always on fire
- the boy has been there some time - a mouse walks in and sits down - it wants to watch
- the mouse knows the Seraph's real name
- sometimes the structure of the fire is not safe - it's designed so a bit will fall on him
- after a while the boy moves in
 
FIELDS OF GLOOP
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All of the men are standing on a large flat piece of metal which goes on literally forever - a metallic plane. The floor has a non-slip surface texture, which has a nice feel. They stand - they don't fall. They are covered in slime which is sperm - deliberately.

One will see a floating 'blob' of sperm, maybe the size of a tennis ball... he will say - openly...

"UFO of cum."

"Touch it" another will say.

This goes on forever!
 
LOCATION
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The entire body has been sawn through. This effect is side splitting and will not end. Does the man fall over? No.

The currents - the electrical pain system in and surrounding the body - are described as 'gushy.'

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PIKES
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Pikes are like gypsies but they live in fields not tents. They basically lie down in the field all year long. This makes you uneasy. Sometimes their back is triangle shaped.

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BASIC WHIRLPOOL
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- what's new? It's accelerating
- square time
- a giant vagina gets attacked by spaceships
 
THE PENIS SWORD
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Say what you like, the penis is a sword shape in this, maybe it's metal, maybe it's even rust - one word though is - ejaculate.

You may often be found in wooden form, particularly in a forest. The man will want to saw you. The men come in different sizes - they can be short or can be extremely tall.
 
TOUCH THE GROOVE
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A man touches a chiselled metal spike - he feels the 'groove' (a chisel mark)... he knows its size, he is 'chiselled as muck' - THIS IS THE START OF THE TORMENT.

Surprisingly, a range of emotions are expressed by the man's face as this occurs. 'Psy' imagery 'occurs.' He knows the event - very well indeed.

THIS IS HELL.

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