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trancesetter21

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Hey kidz, I've got two poems for you to check out. Let me know what you think...
>One united body moving to the sound,
Mechanical animals being controlled.
Moving in time to an ethereal production,
Light tracing in and out of the dark.
Time seems to halt in the flicker of light,
We sit soul to soul in total ecstacy.
Hold on forever to how we feel now,
Breakdown the barriers that hinder us all.
From a world full of evils to me,
To one body in total harmony.<
and now for that special guy...
You,
You are everything I could never be
Leading a life that's perfect to me
The stregnth to hold up all the world
Love abound for your baby girl
Free from the evils society accepts
Pursuing all good till there's nothing left
Eyes to tear you all apart
And a smile that has stolen my heart.
Thanx kids! PEACE
 
I like those both very much good work and thanks for sharing
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~~~~CHERUB~~~~
Aka: Mommyhen
 
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