it will always feel embarrassing as fuck to share that kinda stuff with other people though, especially when the poetry is so simple and stupid. but hey, that's me, I'm simple and stupid, in my mind it has to rhyme as well otherwise it's no fun. I've got a lot of other stuff that I've written that will never see the light of day probably, this was enough for now, maybe I'll share more some other time.
You recognize your own language, very good!
You think this was about him? That's quite presumptuous dude, it's just a shitty poem.
nice anecdote
I wrote this over the last 5-6 years, that particular one 6 years ago. I haven't killed myself, nor I will anytime soon. I'm here posting aren't I? There are people in TDS who are posting about actually killing themselves day in day out, if you think I was going to commit suicide why would you ever reply with such a cringe post and corresponding youtube video yourself? Do you think your message is in any way shape or form helpful to someone you suspect of wanting to do this, no seriously? Please don't respond to people like that if you think they do, it is not helping them at all, even if you put please in the sentence, consider being nice to them in the future instead of inadvertently telling them their shit is cringe. Posts like that can actually help people do it, this is a harm reduction forum and this is the words section. I neither glamorize nor inspire people to do anything, I wrote what's on my mind, writing into the void helps. I made poetry about several different topics, thanks for the critique though. Do you have any other suggestions, questions, or anecdotes that have no relevance, do you want me to write you some rhymes?
