Exhale

[Zennie]

Somewhere she sat
fingers tight around pen
poised over paper
waiting for that must to
whispoer the words to describe him.
But all was silent.
Brows furrowed
she felt the air tingle beneath
her nose as it wisped into her
lungs. Yet eyes closed, her
paper remained
empty.
But slowly
it seemed a smile
crawled across her mouth. Her
eyes, open, flickered as a
single word was formed
black on white.
She folded the paper then
knowing it was complete,
saying only:
Exhale.

 

[brownman]

I always love reading your words...
Good to see ya again, my sweets.

Brownie

 

[Mellabopper]

aww what can i say girl? other than you rock! (and of course your writing does, too)
and i miss ya

::hugs::
Mellabopper

 

[Ashke]

That was awesome!

~*~ Ashke ~*~

 

[Angelight]

u rock the house girly....which is no suprise

miss you
ange
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~*~"you've got to dance like nobody's watching and love like its never going to hurt"

 

[poezante]

This is awesome! Very, very well written.

 

[Zennie]

damnit...i miss him