Don't fear the reaper....

[ButrosButros_Grantos]

Okay, I always like mixing lyrics into my works, usually songs give me motivation. So I just wrote this late night ramble, needs work, hope you get something out of it...

"???" by G.W.Sebire

The curtains flew then he appeared… saying don't be afraid

We begin.
With a smile, a
hesitant hand, upon my own.
Then you ask,
what it is like,
I say, "You have to try yourself."

Come on baby… and she had no fear

And you look,
like I once did,
with a mixture of astonishment,
and also
a touch of wide
eyed bewilderment, on missing out.

And she ran to him… then they started to fly

We party,
and it was fine,
to have someone to love and hold,
and know that,
it is more than
just music, drugs, culture. It is more.

They looked backward and said good bye… she had become like they are

Dissapear,
like times before,
so I think that, I don't have to worry.
It gets late,
and I begin,
to think that something, is not right.

She had taken his hand… she had become like they are

I find you,
cold, lifeless,
I try to cry, but I'm so damn happy.
I think that
I should at least
be worried, but that can wait till comedown.

Come on baby… don't fear the reaper

 

[ButrosButros_Grantos]

Damnit, someone comment!

 

[neverwas]

arg...well this first made me think of The Labirynth...then Peter Pan.

keep up the writting

 

[Rollingrrl]

I love it. I reminds me greatly of a relationship that started and actually kinda ended like this illustrates. Its very well-written. I love the way the lines are arranged. The shorter, longer in a certain order. It reads well and has good flow. Good job honey!

~Shelly~

 

[katmeow]

I like this one, the way you've woven the lyrics in really works well. The original song is a sweet track too

Nice work.