Conclusion in Confusion (Trip Rhyme....check it out)

[Intricate]

Final chapter of this explicit spinal rapture / After 45 minutes of
laughter, my common sense was re-captured / Re-mastered to react faster, but
I still feel rather plastered / Damn, I'm a stupid bastard talkin to that cat
icon of Napster / Noooo, it's that kitten chillin in the kitchen bitchin and
twitchin / Flippin wit it's tail whippin while spittin quotes from Nas' "It
was Written" / Jumpin around, humpin the ground while Transformers techno is
bumpin the sound / Cant stand anymore wit balance poor, I need to somethin
to mound but there's nothin around / Oh shit / strobe kits, glow sticks and
dope trips don't mix / but it's so sick how I enjoy quadruple vision.....one
thing I won't fix / Surrounded by tornadoes and volcanoes as I spoke wit this guy Kano sippin on a glass of Drain-O / The plain of Insane is the terrain my brain roams / Red Threads of personified mopeds depictin dread
said / "We fled beds of Keds instead of givin head to parameds" / What ????
What's the meaning of this ?? / I know dreaming is bliss, but spirits are
seemingly pissed like I cant be redeemed with this / Awakened in a shakin
vacant adjacent basement / Complacent of all other new-comers.....No need for
replacements / Did the hot sun set ?? / wait, it's on the rise like a
computerized enterprise and it aint done yet / I need a fun pet...actually, I
need to stop trippin / It would be monumental if I could walk on the Atlantic
and have giant rocks skippin / I see clear, is the end near ??? or is this
another introduction in production ? / My last remaining articulation is
waitin for further discussion / The topic, Fiberoptic Diagnostics of Ancient
Prophets / With a lasting prediction of non-fiction.....I'm about to to hit
the world harder than huge comets wit no hope to stop
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"Enlightenment is the path, Education is the door / Risk is the key that opens up new brilliant gateways to explore." ~Intricate *~PLUR~*

 

[FunGuy]

That's tight! I can't hear it though, so I don't know how you flow. It sounds a lot like Eminem in that you have that four rhyme in a line thing going. It's real phat, keep it up!

 

[epix]

Very nice, and yes that does remind me alot of Eminem... Good job! =P

 

[Charmin]

No no no, That is not Eminem sounding! *growls*
Intricate = my bestfriend
He got me out of that sellout, commercial shit that plays on MTV.
If you want REAL hiphop with REAL meaning check out Anticon...Deep Puddle Dynamics.
or just to name some names: Dose One, Slug, Sole, Alias.
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"Look down on me, you will see a fool. Look up at me, you will see your lord. Look straight at me, you will see yourself." ~Charles Manson~

 

[FunGuy]

No, no, no. Sorry, but it's written just like Eminem. That's not an insult at all. If you could, you'd sell out too. I wouldn't really consider Eminem a sell-out though, because getting a record deal so that lots of people can hear your music is the goal of almost every musician in this country.

 

[Charmin]

This isn't turning into a god damn debate.

Ok, so the rhyme pattern is also done by Eminem (along with many other people) but content wise...hell no.

Yes I would sell out, if offered a record deal. But I know plenty of people who wouldn't.

But, anyways...I just wanted to pop back on this thread because I knew someone would say something about my comment. *shrugs*

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"Look down on me, you will see a fool. Look up at me, you will see your lord. Look straight at me, you will see yourself." ~Charles Manson~