• ✍️ WORDS ✍️

    Welcome Guest!

  • Words Moderators: Shambles

Butterfly Detonator

crazynate:]

crazynate:]

Bluelighter
Joined
Sep 18, 2009
Messages
562
Location
inside your head Nodding Carefully
It's like FUCK, I can't escape it. This wretched fuckin nightmare is filled with blood and hatred. There's no where to run and hide anymore, everything is up close. My mind, dead set on the future, won't for the life of me let go. Everyday, at one time or another, butterfly bombs are set off all over the campus. My body, the map, is burned by my thoughts, and beaten by the bus. It caries me the memory of the very first time, and tells me it's ok, and that I'll be just fine. Only for a minute, do I stop to think how endless this cycle is, and that I'll never sleep. It's daring, and fun, and nothing can compare. I'll scream for the mountains, but I can never pay the fare. The price is overwhelming, and the pain is too. I never would've imagined either I or you. So here I am, alone and afraid. Yeah I can call someone, but that only lasts for a shade, cause then it's back to the drawing board, and figuring out a plan. A plan to spare my heart, and everything I knew before. Everything I felt, before I opened up that door. It hurts to know that I once was a "good boy", and now the world is above me and studying me like a toy.


can you relate?
 
Last edited:
I'm really not sure if this is for TDS, seems more like Words to me.

if it is a poem, it's quite good, but a word of constructive critsism: restructure it for such a format.
 
i feel ya. if i could even care enough to write so well, i would feel some accomplishment.
 
Not TDS material in my opinion but good writing none the less. I think i'll shift it over to words if it's ok with the OP.
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Top