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drea

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i can lay here and smile
i can laugh in a crowd
i can pretend like everything never happened at all
and i do....
i dont know what couldve been worse
a clean break, an eternal bond
yet all i can do is hang here
my fingers grip
sliding slowly
still smiling
im ok im ok im ok im ok
ill never let you know how it hurts me
the actress in me comes forth
dressed in her full regalia
ready to please, pretend
give illusions
that this girl is really alright
im fine im fine im fine
tokens of our past still litter my room
pictures, clothes, my unsent letters
now i feel a fool
i was so lost in that illusion
so colorfully displayed on my plate for so long
and i told everyone about it
i bragged
i have love, isnt that wonderful?
but it was all a joke
no love
no dream
turns you around and does that to you
no love rips your lungs out and forces you to breathe the water
acclimate to a climate youve neer seen
you left me floating
nothing,....
no splash of light to illuminate me under the water
and all i want to do is breathe
all i want to do is breathe
but i cant do it alone....
(i love you)
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::heaven holds a sense of wonder/and i wanted to believe/that id get caught up when the rage in me subsides::
[This message has been edited by drea (edited 09 December 2000).]
 
wow, that was awesome....good job of expressing your feelings drea, that was nice...and if you need to talk or somethin, i'm here for ya
 
ahh drea,, that was truly beautiful
You will get through it hun
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~~~~CHERUB~~~~
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~I still belive in your eyes~-Gigi D'Agostino
~~~I can be your Wendy, and you can be my Peter Pan. And we can fly to Neverneverland~~~
 
awww drea that was a REALLY sweet poem - straight from the heart and i definitely feel for ya
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hard times will pass, never fear, though during those times you think the heartache will NEVER end. in time though, in time. its just getting to then end of that period that sweems like forever that is the hardest part.
your poem definitely got to me and my eyes got a lil' watery there cause it brings back memories... hard memories that all of us wish we could forget and just leave in the past. but nothing really leaves us has that been a part of our lives. but the only thing left to do would be to learn from it. hopefully it will only make you stronger
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much love,
Mellabopper
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~*~*~ meat is no treat for those you eat ~*~*~
animals are for petting!
"does anyone know where we are? because i think i dont have a clue"
 
that was really nice, touching and true, but like it was said, we learn from these experiences and they will make us stronger. My thoughts and prayers are with you my dear. we've all been through shit and know that you are not alone. we are all here for you and know that when you are not looking, your angel will come and take you off your feet. mad love~
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"To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"
 
drea, i know exactly how that feels. i've been there too many times. good way to get it out. i like muy much.
 
*sigh*
you continue to share my thoughts.
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E-girl
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*Choice, not chance, determines destiny*
"November is all I know."
 
Oh Drea . . . your words are potent . . . Thank you, E-girl, for bumping this amazing poem.
i have love, isnt that wonderful?
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Why aren't you anthologized with Bronte, Keats, Tennison and Browning . . . ?
Fred~
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