bone

[Dastrix Slogan]

one of my older pieces, posting because it refelects this time for me, i have has such writers block lately, haven't been able to come out with anything new for a while

now we must take
this brittle splintered
old dry bone

snap it in half
watch the dirty grey needles fall

and you
my dear
may snatch
and knaw violently at yours
the only moisture you shall find
will be the blood
that runs
from your teeth

and you shall never cease

but i shall bury mine
bury it in the soft turned earth
and let what remains
become the first meal
the beginning
for the smallest form of life

then walk away
and
let
it
go

 

[FixXxer]

ve been there.. for too long at that.. until recently..
ive got another couple ready to post soon as im off the main screen..
sometimes its a real pain in the ass, you know you are capable of writing an amazing peice, as this one shows for you..
just sometimes the words wont come..

keep at it, im sure its comin soon.
and very well on this peice..
i love how you write your lines

 

[Mary Poppins]

god dastrix....simple, simple words - used to great effect.

i could feel see that poem in front of me.

very evocative.

 

[RareForm]

evocative, no joke about that. i like the attitude of it, so non-chalantly dispensed.