Bass

[Living_Proof]

The bass in my ears
reminds me of my pounding heart
the only thing
that has stayed constant
for the last month or so
but sometimes I wonder
if I could take something constant
every time I find something worthwhile
Something
that helps me understand myself
it ends up almost killing me
There really is
nothing
like the feeling I get
from something so beautiful
that it's destructive
It's almost like turning every waking minute
into art
Art
I guess that's a positive way of looking at
each shattered thought
Faded hopes and dreams
melting into each other
to form a self-portrait
that even I don't understand
At least I can attempt to find solace
in the fact
that such misery
is regarded
as genius

 

[cherub]

well written and very well worded. my favorite part is this ......

I guess that's a positive way of looking at
each shattered thought
Faded hopes and dreams
melting into each other
to form a self-portrait
that even I don't understand

 

[Living_Proof]

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback. Lately I've just been letting the words come on their own, without really thinking about what to/not to write. I think it's something that's working out well though...

 

[neverwas]

from something so beautiful
that it's destructive

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that such misery
is regarded
as genius

wow...theres just something about how u have worded these lines that really stand out to me...i really like reading descriptive peices and this one was very easy to read and to visualise and feel