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cherub

cherub

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Whisper to me child of all your dreams maybe
Open your heart dear child,
Cause one day you will know what it really means

Teeter the play and work
with love and care
balance your toys with your daily affairs

Temper your past with only the knowledge from learning
Create your dreams with tender care
Never fearing failures or the gains
Never stop following what is in your heart

Never let me rule you
only ask if you need my hand
Let the journey be yours to ventured
with every learning days ahead.

I only ask you once okay maybe twice to
remember this in your life
Balance in all that you do
Balance the inner you.

There is never a goodbye too long
that we forget how to talk
Never a moment to soon to meet again

But you have such amazing moments
that you give to me as gifts
that you never realized

Thank you for each one
Making me more balanced.
 
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cherub said:
Never let me rule you
only ask if you need my hand
Let the journey be yours to ventured
with every learning days ahead.
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I've been anticipating something from you....This was great...this was truly a wonderful....and the above quoted, i thought that part was soooo good....wonderful write girlie....

:)
 
^^ that one and the one right after are amazing.. This sounds like the last minute advice before parting, my grand father gave me a note like that (not poetry obviously) when I was leaving for another country. Brought back good feelings somehow.. Is it dedicated to someone?
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What a lovely, lovely piece of work. Cherub, this is very touching because it passes beyond sentimentality due to the geniune sentiment behind it. I loooove that.

I also liked the part about balance that DS quoted. Nice use of rhythm there, and the concept of balance is soooo important, especially when raising kids!
 
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Mealtach,,,,, I don't have kids but she is close enough to me that i feel i am here mom in all aspect.

Yes this was for alykitty, she been so great in the simple things she says and doesn't even know the gifts she gives. :)
 
Cherub and I have discussed my remarks about her errors through private messages. I hereby rescind my original post.
 
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i thought it was a breath of fresh air. there seems to be a collective tension in alot of the stuff being posted recently. almost as if you're delineating written instructional answers. nice.
 
TiberCross said:
i thought it was a breath of fresh air. there seems to be a collective tension in alot of the stuff being posted recently. almost as if you're delineating written instructional answers. nice.
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Something I've noticed to - there sometimes a "hivemind" in this forum - we all seem to be a the same place - sometimes! %)
 
cherub said:
Yes this was for alykitty, she been so great in the simple things she says and doesn't even know the gifts she gives. :)
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^^awwww that's gorgeous :)
 
This piece is so unique and different from everything else on BL. I would have to agree with Tibercross....a breathe of fresh air. Very, Very Nice
 
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