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Anticipation or Reception? (not a poem, a question)

Baron

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We found it, and we don't need to unwrap it to see what's inside. Unwrapping it defeats the purpose of finding it... it's the expectation, see, that makes it special.
It's the kindled light in the mirror of not knowing, that it could be anything. Terrible or wonderful.
If you take off the ribbon, you'll know, and the anticipation is over until a new one is found.
What makes things special is the buildup. That's where the wonder lies, whole, clean, and your soap bubble pure and fragile. The perfection achieved?
When you touch a tremulous finger to the shine, you mar it. When you press your nose to the window, you streak it. But by standing back and not knowing if it's there, you believe it to be all and one.
When you finally have to remove the lid... do you wish you didn't, and had that eternal moment back again, or is the new reality, flawed and skewed, beautiful and perfect, what you cling to?
 
ok, ive writtin this like 3 times.. =P.. very nice baron.
baron, i feel what your saying, and ive felt this question many times, its really hard to reply to this because i feel i have to fully explain everything, then it sounds retarded.. heh.. but though all of my journeys and struggles, i was glad i took the "ribbon" off and explored everything there was to offer, *anticipation/the buildup* seem to be a slice of excitement in everything, although that part will someday end, everything i have experienced with that person or thing , and that i will continue to experience will mean more to me than the feeling i felt during the *build up*
i feel the ending coms out "beautiful and perfect" well most of the time because you come to fully understand *IT* once the anticipation of not knowing is past.
eh.. did that sound right?
 
Very nice Baron, I like the way you peice together this line of thought. Philosophy & Poetry at the same time. Bravo!
While I completely agree with this mode of thinking... I have to admit, the satisfation of knowing is almost as good as the anticipation. Does that make any sense?
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Christian
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"The sharpness of memories fade, but never the tone." --ebow
"'slaughter' is just 'laughter' with an "s."--Mr. Sticky
 
I'm glad to have hugged you, even if it did then mar the surface or something like that.
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My philosophy:
Have no expectations and never be disappointed when you find out what truly lies inside.
Coreo
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Good work.
 
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