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A reason for all things

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A reason for all things
thru the corridors of my life
i have opened many doors
i have entered many rooms
always seaching for the key
the key to the door all want to enter
many directions have been followed
many doors mistaken
many keys been given falsely
many times disappointment has prevailed
fate told me you held the key in your hand
i ransomed my soul, my pride, my hidden self
i ransomed my trust and my fear
i concieved you would enter with me
they say all things happen for a reason
i have come to believe it is so
even tho with you i will never enter
you have given me the key
to open the door alone
you taught me to be strong
altho with you i was weak
you taught me to feel truth
altho what i thought we had was a lie
you taught me to see the real me
altho for you i was not enough
you taught me to love
altho it was not to you i should give it
you taught me not to give up
altho for us it would never be
i thought it was you that i needed
nevertheless i have learnt thru the pain
i needed me
you gave me that
the key i had searched for
to the door labelled love
i have entered the room
for which so long i sought
i am here because of you
for this the pleasure negates the pain
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i thought it was you i needed nevertheless i have learnt thru the pain i needed me
 
thanx babee
im new and that was the first of my poems ive put in
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i thought it was you i needed nevertheless i have learnt thru the pain i needed me
 
That was really emotional to read... thank you for the words. *touches heart* You write very well
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Crystal
 
Beautiful. I thought that you would find the key when you realise that there is no key to look for. But you might be right, there might be this key.
 
thank you so much for your replys as i said this was my first post on this awesome site
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i thought it was you i needed nevertheless i have learnt thru the pain i needed me
 
Sweetie,
It takes a lot to make me misty-eyed. Thank you. This was very deep. Maybe we do learn some of life's lessons from those who hurt us most. I'm going to ponder that for awhile...
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Caress
 
I really like this sweetie, it's beautiful. Totally touched a nerve in my own heart. Thanks! Keep writing.
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Peace,
kimmy.
 
thank you so much it was actually a hard thing to write this poem down on paper because its hard for me to really accept how things are but this helped me heal and realise that everything does really happen for a reason and sometimes you dont realise and learn the lesson you were suposed to because your too busy grieving over what you thought the reason was and then you miss the full picture and loose that moment that could of taught you something special that helps you grow
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i thought it was you i needed nevertheless i have learnt thru the pain i needed me
 
Can your poem fit what I feel inside any more perfectly? That was beautiful, I'm sitting in school right now and I just feel like crying thinking about the lost love in my life your poem applies to. eVERYTHING WAS SO PERFECT. " you TAUGHT ME TO BE STRONG, BUT WITH YOU I WAS WEAK." He taught me what I know and made me who I am, but not for him. Breathtaking!!!
 
Like yeah, I felt the Pluuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrr running through like my mind, but then, it was like, like more than that - it was a deeper like Plop man and that's sooooooo kooool man. Your like there, your plurrrrring and plopppping - your hot!
Like serious - Plop was impressed!
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Plopper Bopper
 
im plopping????
well hope thats a good thing heehee
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i thought it was you i needed nevertheless i have learnt thru the pain i needed me
 
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