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poezante

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i thought i had held tight enough..
but alas,
i open my hands to see the void..
..and these days which trample me
have not gotten easier,
but, only to that there seems no end..
time upon hours...
i figure to find..
i seek to find a way..
life hands not another deception..
but yet a feeling of disenchantment..
a feeling of why there is not nothing more..
perhaps in time,
in many of time,
i will strive thru my labyrinth of life,
my path through complicated life
 
Sweet PoeBear. You did it again!!! That was sensational. Absolutely sensational. That's what I call a REAL POEM. Beautiful mix and match of words used uniquely. Sweet and beautiful.
Reminded me of a line I've written to friends in emails and letters many many times.."After all the dragons have been slayed, then what? Surely there must be more to life than this!"
The answer I've found this far...it's really the journey that's worth our lives..not the destination itself...for isn't the final desitanation The End?
Luvs,
-Amina
PS- GodDamn you Poe..you're not beautiful. You're beauty itself. I'm SO honored to know you
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"Like a bird on a wire, Like a drunk in a midnight choir, I have tried in my way to be free" - Leonard Cohen
 
Very beautiful words. And yes, I caught the form of your second paragraph...your words form a trail through the labrynth. Very cool.
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u know its funny.. cuz when i sit, stand.. or even when i am stuck in a car full of obxnious pple, writing.. its like a power takes over me.. i mean, what i write is intentional but its almost like i lose myself in it.. make any sense.? like this poem.. i just wanted to express how my shitty day, month or life is going ya know? lol.. anyhow..
glad u guys like it.. i hope others do as well
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~*CARPE DIEM*~
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Yes makes perfect sense. I write my best when I have no direction, no expectation, no purpose, and no goal. When I HAVE to write, nothing comes out other than bland, droll, lifeless drudgery. But when I'm alone at the keyboard, lost in the reverie far from distractions, everything flows out of me. I don't need to proofread it because I feel in tune with the symphony, my soul is swept by the magic of the moment, and I am content.
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hmm.. this maybe a pity bump but ooo well :P
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Super Rebecki to the resssssuuuuue!!
 
I wish that I had the gift to write that you have. I have so much information in my head and so many thoughts that I would love to write but I cannot seem to find the words to explain all that I am feeling, thinking, etc. I am in awe of your work and hope that someday I too may find that gift, the gift of words.
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"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you."
-Winnie the Pooh
 
Yes! It is the creator...
...that indesribable thing, trance like, a meditative mind state it is... for sure I do feel that when I am creating paintings or drawings or some other installation. Not so much words yet though. I need to play with words a bit more before I can truly tweak them off center a bit.
This forum has everything I need here at the bluelight- nU.
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You have all made my life more than it was before our interaction.
Thank you all very much,
Noodle
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...in that tiny kinda scary house... by the woods .. by the woods, by the woods, by the wooods...
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black dove, black dove...ur not a helicopter, ur not cop out either... black dove, black dove...
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< YYYYYYeeeeeeeeehhhhaaaaaawwwww...
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< Saddle up!
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< Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...
 
"We goin' for that ride now boss?"
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< "...I tried to take it back, but I couldn't."
 
you dont need a spaceship....they dont know you've already lived....on the other side of the galaxy...
 
this bleh's fer u.. apples
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Here's looking at you poezante---->
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I can't wait till I can share with you poems I've written.
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"Time upon hours, I figure to find, i seek to find a way" nice
Life is truly a labyrinth
applesbliss
 
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< *Blech*
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< luved your words, want to show them all at the top again
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