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A Broken Prayer

Altered_Soul9

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A vague sound mumbles a forgotten voice.
It catches my attention with the slightest force.
It rotates my eyes within my own skull.
And reveals the images of a long forgotten smile.
My life is a meaningless replication of the heartless morons.
Therefore I am one.
Therefore I try to be different
And in my attempt to succeed I stumble.
Over, under, and upon this doorway to rejection.
A journey which will only end in death.
Oh how I pray for death.
My knees scarred from the movements.
My hands welded together by hope.
The aches in my body all me to scream
And voice my hurt for those like me.
I try to my fullest to produce a normal life.
Yet I flee from normalcy and being whole.
The muscles in my mind tighten.
The weightless burdens upon my soul.
Made up of demented beliefs and relentless questioning.
Forever to be attracted to a weak existence.
Forever to be destroyed within this skull.

My knees break as I rise up from my prayer...
 
I love this piece. I think its one of the best you've written. Keep being different
 
I have definately become a fan of your work and this one is no different.

I am a big fan of raw emotions and this is one of those i really like.

Reminds me of having a panic attack to be honest but i still enjoyed reading it.

awesome :)
 
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