Why Not? How Could I Improve it Than?. Realise I wrote it under the influence and that affects it a lot. l'll try to write better next time and some pointers would be welcome.
Notes taken when under the influence are fine and can be helpful because they reflect your state... but IMO you need to have a sober view at it as well, at least explain the situation in an introduction and end with a conclusion.
I always like specific descriptions of effects but if there is nothing else besides incoherent tripping remarks it's hard to compose a good picture with them.
At the very least! I'd like you to clean up the layout - use paragraphs and make healthy sentences so that it doesn't appear a vague patch of text.
That being said, I think you are right that there are helpful descriptions in there especially since information is so scarce at this time. Perhaps erowid would use it due to a simple lack therof, but honestly it's not entirely up to par.
Thank you for taking the time and effort to test this relatively unknown substance and writing up stuff about it - if it were a little more coherent it would suddenly be VERY helpful.
cya
