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Raz

Raz

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I want to go away.

I want to go somewhere I don't feel like a disease.

I want to go somewhere I'm not amusing. Somewhere I'm not tolerated. Somewhere I'm loved.

I want to go where Jesus isn't a weapon but a saviour.

I want to go somewhere that makes me not want to cry all the time. I want to go somewhere that I know when people hate me because at least they have the fucking guts to stand up and say it to my face.

I want to go somewhere I don't have to form cliquey little units with the people I love because we're all we have. I want to go somewhere that everybody is the people I love.

I want to go away.

I need to go away.

Help me.

sorry, forgive a bit of self-indulgence...39 days to freedom and counting :) ...

--Raz--
 
Raz said:

I want to go somewhere that makes me not want to cry all the time. I want to go somewhere that I know when people hate me because at least they have the fucking guts to stand up and say it to my face.
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this is another nice piece...i hope you find the resolution u are loking for hun. everyone needs time out sometimes and people need there own place. i have had what u have spoken about. i really liked this and i think u deserve the holiday u are taking.

love you. kel. =D
 
^^^^

Thanks chicken...

I always write these things off the cuff and then come back and read it later and go "wow, that was so much more intense than I thought!" LOL

I actually feel really positive about this whole "getting away" thing, and I'm not really any more depressed or shitty than you get from putting up with frustrating people all day...it just sounds a lot worse than it is. :)

Thanks for the feedback though!

--Raz-- :)
 
**hugs**

Sweetie I really like this one. So much truth, so much raw emotion, so much honesty. I can totally relate to it to, for my own reasons, especially this line: "I want to go where Jesus isn't a weapon but a saviour."

Much luv to ya. :)

~*~kimmy~*~
 
that's really moving...you can feel your frustration and the feeling that you have given up hope but yet deep down still have some

that's what i get from it anyway :)
 
run away with yourself,
to that warm secure place within you.
have an affair and return a new man.

love is here, love is there... but is it anywhere?

i like your poem coz it spills out, freestyle and says something we all recognise.

cuouthere
 
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