Poetry spypilots haiku train

[spypilot]

this is my haiku train
if you wanna add to it feel free to
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wish it wasnt so bad
nothing feels right nowadays
i want it all back

 

[spypilot]

i want it all back
ativan and happiness
it was just better

 

[spypilot]

it was just better
not to be too nostalgic
it was just better

 

[spypilot]

it was just better
maybe im just nostalgic
now its just spreadsheets

 

[spypilot]

now its just spreadsheets
login and work then just sleep
shits just bland this year

 

[spypilot]

shits just bland this year
shits just not worth it today
shits just fully gone

 

[spypilot]

shits just fully gone
cant even buy ice cream now
cant buy anything

 

[SoCalShordie]

this is my haiku train
if you wanna add to it feel free to
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wish it wasnt so bad
nothing feels right nowadays
i want it all back

The first line of your haiku has 6 syllables, not 5. Please correct.

 

[spypilot]

The first line of your haiku has 6 syllables, not 5. Please correct.

fuck i keep messing this shit up
ill fix it soon