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MynameisnotDeja said:
Oh yeah. I know my characters. What I'm struggling with is more..point of view, narration vs more dialogue and when to use both, etc.

Ah, OK. Is it narrated from the POV of one of the main characters, a minor one, or none at all? I've only ever really done first person narration with most things; it seems to be my strength. I suppose if we have a character based mostly on ourselves, then first person may be easier...
 
its really hard to write a novel...i cant even count the amount of "novels" that i wrote three pages of and never picked up again...thats why i like writing poetry...a lot easier to write that a novel

~GH~
 
33-33 said:
Ah, OK. Is it narrated from the POV of one of the main characters, a minor one, or none at all? I've only ever really done first person narration with most things; it seems to be my strength. I suppose if we have a character based mostly on ourselves, then first person may be easier...

It's sort of a "gods eye view" on the main character.
The story is always centered around him and his feelings, but it's not as if he is telling the story.

I have a hard time with first person points of view. I always feel that there are some things that can't be shared (insights, viewpoints, self-honesty) when the character is talking about themselves and their experiences. As opposed to a broader, more detached eye on things. First person works really well sometimes I guess it just depends.

The point of view thing I have a hard time with. My main guy is the center of the story but with the point of view Im using, it makes me unable to show some of the stuff that goes on when he isnt around which could possibly advance the story. I know I could do multiple viewpoints, but I'm not sure I'm ready for that, its so huge, being inside the heads of my seven characters. I don't think the story could handle that, its too huge. And I feel weird having it be one point of view most of the story then switching randomly a few places where I need it. I dont like that I want the point of view to stay the same as not to confuse the reader (one of the first "rules" I read was pick a point of view strategy early on and be CONSISTANT).

So the challenge I'm left with is to present the personalities and character of the other important characters only through their involvement with my main character. Its hard!
 
Oh yeah and I killed one of my characters today.
Not so much killed him, but am going to go through the whole thing and rip him from existence. He is useless and just complicating things.

Ah ha ha! I love being god! Die! *yes im weird* lol
 
*bump*

It's been awhile so I figured I'd renew this. I'm getting very near completion of the first draft of my book. I have a title picked out but I'm keeping it secret for now. Once I complete my first draft, then comes the fun part. Rewriting and editing. A lot of people hate that but I truly enjoy rewriting more than writing the first draft, it's strange, it's like I have to have this crappy badly written foundation to work with before I can go back and redo everything to make it good.

Anyone else out there still working on a book? If so post here so we can motivate each other please kthanxbai. <3 :)
 
^^ Lmao I'd read it.

I've started a few novels......started being the key word, I always know perfectly how to start and end my stories but can never get from A-B. I've been writing more recently though, thinking of writing a book based on my enlightened views on life and the universe :P.
 
I'm slowly working on a short story collection. I'd like to do that first before I start on a novel. I'm going to include one of the short stories that I posted on here sometime last year. I have to tidy it up first though.

I don't write everyday. Usually I write in spurts every three of four days, where I will write anywhere between 2-6 hours non stop.

The problem is I end up deleting a lot of what I write for the same reasons that recons said, I end up hating a lot of what I write, even after people have told me it is good.

I'll get there eventually though. Then I'll get started on that novel ;)
 
i was just writing up a few more page of my current work. i plan to seek publishers for this before autumn of next year. i'll just keep knocking on doors with this work, when it's finished, until someone agrees to give me the money i need to research and travel freely.

i depend heavily on empirical knowledge of the topics i'm writing about, despite the plots being fictitious, so without that unique visceral input my inspiration well runs dry quickly.

and no, i don't write while stoned :|
 
ya ive been working on a novel on and off as i try to get my BA in fiction writing...
 
I'm working on it! I'm actually almost completely done with my first draft! If you guys would like me to post some of it, I can post some of it here, but I *did* post the sex scene in a SLR thread awhile back. I'd locate it but I suppose it doesn't matter as that scene has been edited a long since then and is a little different now. I want critiques, so tell me what scene you guys would like to read and I'll make a post here in words:

1)the opening scene
2)the sex scene
3)the scene where everyone does shrooms (hehe)

vote
 
the sex scene!

i'm still working on shorts for the time being. will definitely get to longer novels soon enough.

am excited.
 
Okay I will post something from my book within the next couple days.

It's hard, working on a novel. I have to try and stay focused on perfecting this same old story I've been creating for sooo long, when really, I'm just bursting at the seams right now wanting to let out all this creativity I have bubbling up. I just want to write write write. I don't want to lose focus.

I'm excited too! It's the best feeling ever to just feel the wave coming from you, reading to flow into words. :D
 
I made a self published novel about a year ago and I still dab in and out of writing. I'm still pooling together ideas for a novel, one worth writing imo as lots of time will be invested in it.

Good to see people doing something interesting in their lives btw and not just grinding away for gold ;]
 
I'm committed to being a starving artist/writer for life.

If one day it ends up getting me fed, thats cool. But until then, I write and paint because it's what I know I'm meant to do. And one day, someone will read my books.

:)
 
MynameisnotDeja said:
*bump*

It's been awhile so I figured I'd renew this. I'm getting very near completion of the first draft of my book. I have a title picked out but I'm keeping it secret for now. Once I complete my first draft, then comes the fun part. Rewriting and editing. A lot of people hate that but I truly enjoy rewriting more than writing the first draft, it's strange, it's like I have to have this crappy badly written foundation to work with before I can go back and redo everything to make it good.

Anyone else out there still working on a book? If so post here so we can motivate each other please kthanxbai. <3 :)

I'm working on a book but it's non-fiction so perhaps it doesn't belong in this thread. In any event, I'm two chapters shy of a complete draft, which will take at least another year to complete (including research time). Wrtiting it has been simultaneously a hellish and joyous experience. I'll be glad it it's finished, and even happier if I find a publisher (otherwise I'll probably be out of a job).

Regards,

S
 
has anyone heard of the write a book month in november?
http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/whatisnano

What is NaNoWriMo?

National Novel Writing Month is a fun, seat-of-your-pants approach to novel writing. Participants begin writing November 1. The goal is to write a 175-page (50,000-word) novel by midnight, November 30.

Valuing enthusiasm and perseverance over painstaking craft, NaNoWriMo is a novel-writing program for everyone who has thought fleetingly about writing a novel but has been scared away by the time and effort involved.

Because of the limited writing window, the ONLY thing that matters in NaNoWriMo is output. It's all about quantity, not quality. The kamikaze approach forces you to lower your expectations, take risks, and write on the fly.

Make no mistake: You will be writing a lot of crap. And that's a good thing. By forcing yourself to write so intensely, you are giving yourself permission to make mistakes. To forgo the endless tweaking and editing and just create. To build without tearing down.

As you spend November writing, you can draw comfort from the fact that, all around the world, other National Novel Writing Month participants are going through the same joys and sorrows of producing the Great Frantic Novel. Wrimos meet throughout the month to offer encouragement, commiseration, and—when the thing is done—the kind of raucous celebrations that tend to frighten animals and small children.

In 2007, we had over 100,000 participants. More than 15,000 of them crossed the 50k finish line by the midnight deadline, entering into the annals of NaNoWriMo superstardom forever. They started the month as auto mechanics, out-of-work actors, and middle school English teachers. They walked away novelists.

So, to recap:

What: Writing one 50,000-word novel from scratch in a month's time.

Who: You! We can't do this unless we have some other people trying it as well. Let's write laughably awful yet lengthy prose together.

Why: The reasons are endless! To actively participate in one of our era's most enchanting art forms! To write without having to obsess over quality. To be able to make obscure references to passages from our novels at parties. To be able to mock real novelists who dawdle on and on, taking far longer than 30 days to produce their work.

When: You can sign up anytime to add your name to the roster and browse the forums. Writing begins November 1. To be added to the official list of winners, you must reach the 50,000-word mark by November 30 at midnight. Once your novel has been verified by our web-based team of robotic word counters, the partying begins.

Still confused? Just visit the How NaNoWriMo Works page!

Anyone interested in doing this? I would offer the winner a prize of having their book sticky noted up at the top for a month or two in order to gain more readership of it.

Thoughts?
 
It's a cool concept. I don't know if I'd have time to do it though. I could perhaps have the first draft of my novel by then, but it would be far far more than 50,000 words.
 
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