Where will it end

GillyWin

GillyWin

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incomprehensable
blearily recognisable
the pain
numbness my companion

sequences of time mean nothing
but another day
month
year

theres no way back
no way forward
the present is meaningless

the facade is an addictioin
the pain induring infliction
The urge in my desire
only enebriates the fire

Escapism means nothing
being this far in
a normailty i crave
other than this
 
:)

this:

Originally posted by GillyWin
sequences of time mean nothing
but another day
month
year

theres no way back
no way forward
the present is meaningless

the facade is an addictioin


is my favourite part. i particularly like the line "the facade is an addiction". i understand that all too well.

and i like the contradiction that isn't (that totally doesn't make sense, but work with me here, i'm sleep-deprived ;)) in the "time means nothing ... but" part, too.

nice work :)
 
Definately a good read,,,, i feel you on this when i read this, definately great choices of words ! :)
 
Someone should copy this to Bluelight Shrine

Such a beautiful peice from such a beautiful person.

Rest Peacefully.
 
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GillyWin said:
theres no way back
no way forward
the present is meaningless
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It's strange that things have changed since we last played the MSN drunken game. I still think about you.

(when I said apathy I was trying poetry on for size. I thought you thought the same)
 
Some people knew her in real life.

Most people wish they did.

Still thinking about you G.
 
dexis said:
She died? How sad. So how did yall find out she died?
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There is a forum called the Bluelight Shrine, right down the bottom of the main forum page. This is where you can pay your respects to Bluelighters that have passed away.
 
her family must have hurt hard... she is in love now though right... awsome see you soon beautiful.
 
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