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The Devil's World

Renz Envy

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The Grotesque Sociopathic Indulgent Orgy of Renz Envy

The Devil's World (Greed)


Pushed by fear,
Pulled by greed,
Run little minions,
Follow his lead,
If you wish to join his team,
Take the fruit,
Spread its seed.

He is anger he is fear,
He is the pleasure we try to steer,
Tears and anguish are a comedy,
The world's existence is his Tragedy.

Heartbreak, cold, dark and thunder,
Words cannot describe what lies down under,
Eyes, ears, a calming voice,
We better run, for we made the choice.

All demons were once born angels.


-Renz Envy,

Three Blind Sheep (Sloth)

Three blind sheep walk with wolves,
One fell asleep just like a fool,
It is raped, torn and pillaged,
Now two sheep remain in the village.

Two Blind sheep walk with wolves,
One was smart and used its tools,
It offers the other sheep as an offering,
The wolves tear the sacrifice apart,

The betrayer felt no suffering.

One Blind sheep, walks with wolves,
Now, forever alone, Slowly,
She is chewed to her bones.

-Renz Envy,


Succubus (Envy)

Her lips smile thin,
A euphoric, beautiful grin,
She says it's only you,
For she will never sin,

You take her to your heart,
She bites your precious fruit,
Her methods are so calming,
Voice silky as a flute,

You go through everyday,
A spiral of decay,
The heart begins to weaken,
The fruit has now grown rotten,
Her thin lips caress yours,
Everything will be okay.

The mouth that lies is the mouth that kisses,
The mind that believes is the arrow that misses,
She will never admit her subservience to him,
For her one and only love is above all other men,

She writhes in pleasure, guiltless and sly,
Your mind can see it, but thoughts can lie,
Your stomach feels wet, no it is blood,
A knife protrudes out, where there was once love.

You were the cause of her misbehavior,
An excuse used to return to his flavor,
Agony flows through your body like fire,
She was born under him, the greatest liar.

-Renz Envy
 
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These are cool. I hope that you're inspired to write the other four. :)
 
Very nice, I especially like the way you articulated your thoughts/feelings in (Envy)
 
Verry good.
Pushed by fear,
Pulled by greed,

Liked this. Fear and greed - the pre-requisite to evil.

Poems relating to the devil, a recognition of evil and consequences. Very nice.

Though I'm a bit unsure of the last poem "Your stomach feels wet, no it's blood". I think you'd know it if someone knifed you in the gut. And maybe a bit extreme - It's more common for promiscuous woman to break your heart and soul, rather than give you a knifing when you're not looking.
 
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