My Obnoxious Brother

[pk.]

my obnoxious brother
does everything loudly--
the crunching of doritos,
the slamming of doors &
cups on the table.
he turns the TV on loudly,
he shits loudly--
his world is an auditorium
of the shittest one man band
the world has ever seen,
and when he dies
he'll be heard in his coffin,
above ground.

 

[Tude]

Lol I thought of my brother when I read this. Replace Doritos with spicy Cheetos...

 

[New]

What about your brother amplifies every sound that he makes? I certainly have associates with which I can relate this kind of annoyance, I'm just curious as to what makes your brother this individual.

 

[pk.]

I think it's a passive form of expressing anger/discontent with his 9-5 job and the constant routine, to be honest, however I could be wrong