Goodbye

[tubgirl.jpg]

And the first words we spoke
was the start of goodbye


All the drugs made us tender,
just like goodbye


Every mess that we made
was another goodbye


The nights held us hostage,
preparing goodbye


Those face-framing tendrils,
each strand was goodbye


You just disappeared

and it feels like




goodbye

 

[cduggles]

And the first words we spoke
was the start of goodbye

This just grabbed me by the throat! Strong opening

Those face-framing tendrils,
each strand was goodbye

This is beautiful

 

[Lil'LinaptkSix]

Every mess that we made
was another goodbye

I feel this... sharply.
Not very fond of goodbyes.

 

[cduggles]

Ja, the more I read this the more I like! @tubgirl.jpg