Poetry Duality

[Snafu in the Void]

Waking or sleeping?
breathing or coughing?
Talking while lying

Education or wisdom?
Compassion or pity?
Oblivious disillusioned freedom

Filet Mignon with nervous tremors
White gloves working with white powders
Hacking into the password

Rusting slowly while sitting alone on my iron throne
Driving 100 on the freeway with my hazard lights on
Does it really even matter?

Thinking is not believing
Neurotic chaos seething
I can't even write a fucking poem
without feeling like I'm deceiving








sometimes I just write... stream of consciousness... I don't even review my own poems or proofread

¿enjoy?

 

[Mysterier]

Indeed I did enjoy it. Pleased to see you around.

 

[Asclepius]

Am not an Alan Watts, fanboi, but his words do bring some peace, personally.sometimes.
Confusion.
It's a forest.

 

[tubgirl.jpg]

I really enjoyed reading it dude. I think the whole piece is very cool.

Filet Mignon with nervous tremors

This is great. Love it. Visceral.

Driving 100 on the freeway with my hazard lights on
Does it really even matter?

Awesome.

 

[Juniper Bruhmomentius]

Propably your best one (I love this style)

 

[0.o_LaCuNa_o.0]

4:20AM

 

[FixXxer]

sometimes I just write... stream of consciousness... I don't even review my own poems or proofread

¿enjoy?

I'm sorry if my previous comments made you feel like you had to.. do whatever you enjoy.

My intention was to show it as an option..
I did not mean for it to feel obligatory to the point that you feel the need to explain this of your writing.

And if I played no role in your decision to say this.^


Know I enjoyed it... and... Thank you.

excellent use of and formulation of questions
great flow
vivid imagery

 

[Snafu in the Void]

@FixXxer nah man I don't even know what you're talking about tbh, not referring to anything you said

I get drunk and just start writing then after 5 minutes get bored. I think I just like playing with words. I never end them properly.