Want

[FixXxer]

Want--

combat shifts into favor,
this weeks flavor, napalm.
soothe your burns,
cuz it yearns to defeat.
too late to retreat,
you must fight back

slipping as u turn,
the pain begins to burn.
when will you learn
to watch your back.
a skill you tend to lack,
as they continue the attack.

bear your sheild,
head for the feild.
dont think to yeild,
for they snipe you down.
no sound but suffering.
enough to ring a bell.

you get up and shoot,
destroyed all the loot.
lives taken with yours,
cuz u knew it was done.
tho it was fun,
they all had their guns.

it was right there signed.
eye for an eye,
makes the world go blind.
but who dares risk their sight?
especially in this modern night.

covered up all truth,
directly from youth.
lied to about heroes,
dreams of the greater.
later tell them, your in control..
you practically own our soul.

WELL I WANT IT BACK

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

I liked this very much, especially the way the images and the simple rhyme seemed to echo the last verse that this heriosm is all but a lie.

 

[yakksoho]

This was so thrilling and mind chilling and DIRECT, it speaks clear though its in broken half sentences, the parsed literature of the mind screaming through at daybreak to all the nights to come

 

[Mysterier]

^agreed. this was exceptionally precise, and nicely said.

 

[cherub]

you are one of my favorite writters when it comes to imagery and this one is no different.. i can see it as i read it