This is Potential

[ControlDenied]

He came into the kitchen that dark winter. All alone
I waited for weeks in the house that held those traumas
but nobody came. This is the feeling that time is gone,
the opposite of what might happen. Strength was
shown to the dog in a wicker mug and it got drunk. He roamed
around the floor breathing power asking for pizzas,
lifted me up and flung me by squatting to the ground,
the dense, sick soul energy felt so simply. His true colours
reflecting me as a lone wolf with the same desire to own
everything, especially those fucking sheep. He said I was famous
in the great hall of time, in the space of the unknown.
He uncrouched, left bidden on a children's bicycle,
claiming in the electric void: "This is potential".

 

[up all night]

I've had more than a few drinks, and I don't know if it's because of, or despite, but I liked this one.

 

[bone$aW]

Either I'm totally not getting it, or it needs to be edited for a little clarity. absurd man, and I like absurd. is it absurd for the sake of absurdity? ugh, sometimes I feel like I did too many drugs....

 

[New]

Potential often doesn't make sense until realized.

 

[haikod]

i liked it even with the misunderstanding. it was on edge, maybe shifty is a better term.

 

[Mehm]

dog humans, abuse, out of place words on purpose. very interesting

 

[Jabberwocky]

im unsure as to what others are speaking of, but i enjoyed it, that disjointed nature feels purposeful and it add to teh quickly building sense of a world. If you chose the same space to write things in a linear manner the depths of feeling and imagery would not have been felt as clearly. I think this line cleanly sums up the feeling and the tone and direction of the work

This is the feeling that time is gone,
the opposite of what might happen.

Also new: that was funny as hell.