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The Hanged Man

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The Hanged Man--

So long been in my mind, I feel confined.
Trying to become aligned, with better times.

Need to stop fighting my writing and let it flow,
I only need minimal control.
Just enough to share your effect on me,
with intent to improve what you may not see.
Full forgiveness when it happens,
life is about experience and overcoming challenge.

Need to have faith in the ride, and share my feelings inside.
Is it brave not to confide? Is that being alive?

Guess I just dislike judgments. Because of this,
I tend to hide, or just not have a message to blare,
so I don't have to care about the opinions people share.

Tryin' to stop chokin', and open.
Lovingly, blocking out negativity,
that there potentially could be,
when another possibility,
is that it turns out great.
Just don't wanna see or hear hate.

Criticism. When constructive is conductive to improvement.
Destructively, unfortunately,
it creates negative energy, for both you and me.

I have no desire to tell you how to live, and I will always forgive
Sharing messages of cooperation, together we can achieve anythin'
Consideration for your neighbours, and the effects of your own behaviors.
You can be one of the world's saviors, but start with your own fire, and true desires.

Controlling your own perception and reaction, in what you deem to be the best way,
that leads to an understanding ear, that will not fear what you have to say,
and then have them dismiss it right away.

I do feel the need to preach this, difference doesn't equal weakness.
Let there be justice for all of us, and show that we care.
Open your heart, never despair, keep your faith, utilize prayer.
 
What I enjoy most about your writing is the untamed flow billowing out with ease; your rhyming doesn't feel forced or stilted; rather, it's perfectly elucidated as if it's a cosmic scripture unfolding naturally from you.
 
What I enjoy most about your writing is the untamed flow billowing out with ease; your rhyming doesn't feel forced or stilted; rather, it's perfectly elucidated as if it's a cosmic scripture unfolding naturally from you.
I love the way you worded that. Had to look up elucidated to make sure i understood it lol, i appreciate unique words that are rarely used
Thank you :)
 
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