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Creative Rap Zone vs. I'm smashing very eye catching ratatatat my shades of grey all matching

madness00

Sr. Moderator: NMI, MH, CD, SLR
Staff member
Joined
Aug 8, 2018
Messages
11,751
Location
New England
3 babies in a cobra clutch, two under each arm
Driving to the farm to make human parm
Bass so heavy im poppin car alarms
No one gives a fuck when i smile with charm
 

boofythe

Bluelighter
Joined
Feb 11, 2020
Messages
171
Location
Lost Angeles, CA
free drugs, i feel like its my charm
might have to go back because i shot it all up in my arm
dont wanna pay for it, so i might have to go and cause someone harm with this firearm
oh how this g19 always does the trick, hit lick after lick , just so i can fuck around and have my fix
you see its very easy for me to snap like twix
now i got a couple bricks aint worried bout shit because im lit
this is a very generic but fuck it who wanna get there wig split?
 

Shady's Fox

Bluelighter
Joined
Jul 12, 2017
Messages
7,457
Location
Palm trees & sea, just walkin along the beach.
free drugs, i feel like its my charm
might have to go back because i shot it all up in my arm
dont wanna pay for it, so i might have to go and cause someone harm with this firearm
oh how this g19 always does the trick, hit lick after lick , just so i can fuck around and have my fix
you see its very easy for me to snap like twix
now i got a couple bricks aint worried bout shit because im lit
this is a very generic but fuck it who wanna get there wig split?
Avoid verbosity, doesn't get you anywhere. So I might fly like this bullet. Have some subtle jokes -- you have potential.
 

w01fg4ng

Moderator: CD
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Joined
Jun 28, 2009
Messages
9,618
Location
In your head
It's in the eye of the bee holder
Visions tied then roll the boulders
Buzz and sting then see colder
Queen size, she's older

Tongue tied, a real horror
It's on fire, stop drop and roll her
Coronavirus, TP hoarder
Americanized, we bolder
 

DeadManWalkin'

Bluelighter
Joined
Jun 30, 2019
Messages
2,610
Location
Saudi Arabia
I do lots of drugs and call to work "I can't come I have ebola."
When I hear you have dope I'll be on your door like jehova
I'm high as fuck, listening to music, so I'll dance
When women see me dance, they'll drop their pants
And yeah, it might be so that I have tendency to rant
But my words are real and behind them I'll always stand
My style is great, but I never wear orange
In my pocket's are always permanent markers and syringe
Some people here might think I'm kinda stupid
But I'm so intellectual that I worship Cupid
This is DMW, with his very fine rhymes
Now it's time to finally say - bye bye.
 

madness00

Sr. Moderator: NMI, MH, CD, SLR
Staff member
Joined
Aug 8, 2018
Messages
11,751
Location
New England
Pistol grip pump on my lap
Try to find it need a map
Because its camo hard like Rambo wielding bamboo on a Jap
 

Xorkoth

🎨 ARTministrator 🎨
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Joined
Feb 8, 2006
Messages
48,171
Location
In the mountains
Lakes swimmin', fisher killin'
Or fish are killin', wrapping with a villain
I meant rapping, I'm chillin', at least until in
Darkness overwhelming inside, can I still win?
Beneath green twin pins, swearing in with the book thin
Torn pages shattered like old tin, occupying the trash bin
Thick with remembrance of being grand like the whims of Odin
Now laying forgotten, though once begotten of something bright
And how laced with rotten sentiments of violence, one to fight
Power at every turn, slow but bright to burn, fully besotten
By the might of virtue, endlessly right, unfailingly, as is his right
Divine fountain of thin skin, cotton sight, lack of spite, yet
Upon each night, dreams fail to subvert destiny's manifest right
To upend insight regarding each human's right
And slowly, like poison, spreads ardently its blight
Deftness of perception of upheaval leadin' to joy's end
You ask what might become of such laymen
As would dare to shake the foundations and pick up the fight
Alas, with fear abiding within our shared atmosphere
The answer is sadly quite abundantly ever-clear:

Some find their answer, yet lose it in beer
Some are forever powerless against fear
Some choose to try hard, and are defeated year after year
Some quietly seal off the world of their peers
And stick to the clear truth
Of what they were taught when they were reared
Among them, life and its meaning forced to be clear
As before, never questioned, but the world still knows fear
And even some we hold dear, who lift up the cause
Lose their way and end up up the predator's jaws

Who does this leave to stand up to the ruth-
-Less whose pursuit of obfuscation of truth
Poisons a world against what should be easy
Loving each other should never be seen as bein' cheesy
Sad to say that the mantle of savior
Has been tried; he died, torn down by those who savor
Continuation of perpetually short-sighted selfish behavior
Leaving no one remaining to pick up the lead
As all of the rest of us continue to breed, and fail to heed

Dark enough, I'm gonna go back to my book, and read
Thinking too much on the world hurts, indeed
 

Xorkoth

🎨 ARTministrator 🎨
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Feb 8, 2006
Messages
48,171
Location
In the mountains
I can't help it, my peep
Talking shit doesn't do it for me
I like to laugh but am not feeling too fun-E
 

boofythe

Bluelighter
Joined
Feb 11, 2020
Messages
171
Location
Lost Angeles, CA
Avoid verbosity, doesn't get you anywhere. So I might fly like this bullet. Have some subtle jokes -- you have potential.
thanks but I'm just an illiterate dope fiend, i don't know what verbosity means :(
good thing! my boy google just told me what you meant
oh shit there i go again
all the nonsense words in between my fucking rhymes
probably because im been doing all these charlie sheen lines
going 100 miles an hour but im obviously trynna go faster
all these problems and this drug is always the answer
now i rack it up when i should wrap it up

and i dont know why i rap like this
or why im even on here doing this
as if im supposed to get noticed
get rich and act fucking stupid driving around in my lotus
like im on top of the world like im that bitch potus
that sounds pretty bogus, i rather just be me and be the coldest


but thanks for the critique %)
 

BellaJewel

Bluelighter
Joined
Mar 24, 2020
Messages
522
Location
Surf City, USA
Chattin’ with a friend
He got some fat strange
He’s been taking risks
His life’s got to change

Feelin’ outta sorts
He wants more of her
Sick of his old joint
He makes new chick purr

Gonna take a leap
This time it’s for good
Leave the past behind
If only he could
 

boofythe

Bluelighter
Joined
Feb 11, 2020
Messages
171
Location
Lost Angeles, CA
everything could be good, shit might turn out okay
if i only done what i should, maybe things wouldnt be this way
i wish i never went to the hood, then these drugs wouldnt be fucking up my brain
but my ground i stood, and i swore that i'd remain the same
i think im really just misunderstood, i guess i'm the one to blame
 

Shardzvark

Greenlighter
Joined
Aug 21, 2020
Messages
11
It's the escape artist in me
Always trying to get free
An imaginary prison
I can feel but can't see
With 4 walls closing in again
This time I can't let it-
Win, doe . OPEN THIS BITCH UP
Even if someone could hear
they wouldn't give no fucks.

"Everything you'll ever need,
You already posses.
Don't let your mind
Play tricks on you
And diminish your success."

"Bitch, who the fuck untied you??
You're getting on my nerves
Now Get The FUCK
Back in the basement
Before you GET what you deserve!"
(hoe)

O . o
W T F ??

Idfk you guys, I wouldn't even ask.
I blame it on my train of thought
(It likes to jump the tracks).
Got no rhyme or reason
To make this all make sense
Lyrical consistency can
TAKE MY BIG FAT COCK IN THE ASS.
 
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