When "I am sad/scared/alone" just doesnt cut it...

Ixchellian

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I know there's people here who have an easier time using verse or metaphor in describing their emotions and/or situation. For the most part, I keep my writing very private.... but I've learned recently that if its not recorded and shared somewhere for posterity or personal edification, things I write tend to vanish.... along with any concurrent memories.

So here's two of mine, written for & about one of the very very few ppl I care deeply about.... during a trip of her own to the Dark Side.

For those of us who feel the need, I guess here is as good a place as any for bad poetry. :P

-Waits-

time trickled melting brass runs down the face of the clock, searing trails with sweeping hands away traces of light's last holdings. sun so cold turning nights so warmly deep that once again its welcome touch shivers along electric bones.
only crying quiet sounds of dream to skip lines between wires left bound, nothing's left but blood iron dust drizzle across the sand.
but for the pins behind these eyes, which remind when closed, dig at steady memory of one unknown. to taunt during hours of awareness, torment in surrender to sleep, it sings the future known. unattainable.

________

-Crumbs-

paths through lead, lines leading through metal, scratched in names long lost.
crumbs decay in dens of momentary horrors amber-sealed by consuming reality.
preserved in absence of existence, this insistent licking of irresistible temptation.
in sight of truth beyond possibility, reaching fingers of sensual theft strip all pale of hope.
 
tds(in essence)/verse/poetry are a deeply established in my life.

but, this cant stay here
*bites tongue.

ill be lazy, and then leave a fat redirect to words...

<3
thank you though, i would love this to remain, as a concept, but cant, these personal words of yours, i dont want to straight remove from here, as it is your inspiration, and a strong one i cant deny.
 
yeah, I just saw a whole nother forum. I can't move it, otherwise I would. besides, my smartphone doesn't seem to like the rest of BL.... TDS is the only forum that seems to load.

it sucks anyways. so snuff it if you will.
 
^thats not all bad
;-)
t/y for understanding, and as said, they could be merged, the poems posted in a relative thread... idk

deserves views or responses though, so

hits snooze button before-
moving to words?
 
hey, even mods can has a lazy sometimes. lol

I intended it to be a TDS-specific words thing.... not just gooey love crap or odes to a cat.... a small place in literature though, those things may have.

It's just petty gut wrenching sometimes.... living on the dark side.

edit: Post #469...... how ironically Freudian
 
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