Vacant Eyes

[GlowPupp-E]

The distant eyes stare straight ahead
Not veering from the center
I scream, I cry, I wail inside
trying to get your attention
But you don't see me, don't hear me,
don't care
You go on so focused, as if I
am not there
So what am i supposed to feel
What the fuck do you want me to do
Teach me to go on as calmly as you
And to deny the feelings I bestow upn you.
(A little less violent thoughts post-e era)
PLUR
Buffy (the e-hater slayer)

 

[CytocHromE]

hi Glowpuppy
In response to all 3 poems.
There is such a contrast in emotion, very vivid descriptions. I don't know whether to praise you, or worry for you. hehe.
Either way I enjoyed them. keep postin so I can keep a readin. =-)
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*Give a man a fish, he eats for a day. Teach a man to fish, he eats for a lifetime.*

 

[GlowPupp-E]

Thanks for your reply. You see, they were written for different people and at different times. The angry one was written months before i ever did e. And the other two were post e. So i think even though i may hurt i have mellowed out but i'm still an emotional person. so anyway...thanks!
buffy