mammary6996
Greenlighter
- Joined
- Jul 15, 2016
- Messages
- 6
Run, Run,
Your Slowly Dying,
Got So Many Options,
But None Your Trying,
Bunt, Bunt,
Your Dope's Your Life n',
You Got So Many Concoctions,
Another Ones Worth Trying.
Drugs, Drugs,
You Loath Your Life n',
You Got So Many Problems,
Another Verse Worth Writing.
Numb, Numb,
Although You Hurt Inside n',
You Got So Many Costumes,
You Cover Hurt From Sighting.
Done, Done,
All So Perturbed From Rhyming,
Truth's Got So Many Harsh Views,
Few Discover The Worst's Not Lying.
# Please note: the first few lines coloured in red are adapted from Moderator 'CJ's' "Something short I wrote in Rehab", and the rest is my short addition to his work.
I would love to hear any and all criticism and comments on this brief piece of speech in which ye peeps can feel free to read as thee please ��.
I would also absolutely be psyched if anyone contributed further rhymes to expand this (according to the rhyme scheme as best as you can if possible OR even changing the rhyme scheme entirely for something awesome and inspirational). Peace ✌ my fellow lyricists and Bluelighters ��.
Your Slowly Dying,
Got So Many Options,
But None Your Trying,
Bunt, Bunt,
Your Dope's Your Life n',
You Got So Many Concoctions,
Another Ones Worth Trying.
Drugs, Drugs,
You Loath Your Life n',
You Got So Many Problems,
Another Verse Worth Writing.
Numb, Numb,
Although You Hurt Inside n',
You Got So Many Costumes,
You Cover Hurt From Sighting.
Done, Done,
All So Perturbed From Rhyming,
Truth's Got So Many Harsh Views,
Few Discover The Worst's Not Lying.
# Please note: the first few lines coloured in red are adapted from Moderator 'CJ's' "Something short I wrote in Rehab", and the rest is my short addition to his work.
I would love to hear any and all criticism and comments on this brief piece of speech in which ye peeps can feel free to read as thee please ��.
I would also absolutely be psyched if anyone contributed further rhymes to expand this (according to the rhyme scheme as best as you can if possible OR even changing the rhyme scheme entirely for something awesome and inspirational). Peace ✌ my fellow lyricists and Bluelighters ��.
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