THE CHURCH OF RAVE

[JD-G]

I GRIN FOR WHAT, I DO NOT KNOW FROM CHEEK TO CHEEK, SEEING TRACES OF GLOWS
THE STROBES THE SOUNDS THE VIBES SURROUND
THIS HOUSE OF SOULS OF HIDDEN GOALS
THERE ON THE COUCH WITH EYES BACK IN THEIR HEAD, I TAG A PULSE ENSURING THEIR NOT DEAD
BUT THEIR NOT HERE NOT ON THIS EARTH
THEY HAD TO PASS THROUGH THE ROOMS I CAME THROUGH FIRST
STARTING WITH THE ONE FULL OF POINTLESS CHATTER, CHASING A PILL WITH A DASINI SPLATTER,
NEXT ROOM DOWN THE MUSIC MOVES, DANCIN,SMILIN ENJOYING GROOVES
A LAVA LOUNGE AROUND THE BEND,GRAVITYS STRONG PULLIN ME IN
THE MELLOWIST ROOM IV SEEN SO FAR
MOTIONING ME IN A GIRL NAMED STAR
OFFERING A MASSAGE AND ENDLESS CONVERSATION
RECOGNIZING AT ONCE SHES IN MY SITUATION
I FEEL SO GOOD I CANT EXPLAIN
IF IT GETS ANY BETTER ILL ORDER CHAMPANGE
FOR THIS OCCASION OF PLUR AND FUN
IT SEEMS I MUST SHARE IT WITH EVERYONE
EVENTHOUGH THEIR STRANGERS
I FEEL AND SEE DEEP DOWN RIGHT NOW THERE JUST LIKE ME
ANOTHER ROOM ACROSS THE HALL DRUM N BASS PLAY FOR ALL
FEELING SO GOOD I COULD JUST EXPLODE
TRANSFORMING MYSELF FROM TRANCE TO DANCE MODE
THE VIBES ARE POSITIVE AND THE ENERGY HIGH
I THEN REMEMBER THE MUSIC WAS WHY
GLOWSTIX LAZERS TURNTABLES SPINNIN
LOOKIN AROUND AT EVERYONE GRINNIN
BRIGHT LIGHTS ON NOW THE CLOCK HAS WON
ITS 4 AM WEVE ONLY BEGUN
LEAVING THE HOUSE THE EVENT WAS DONE
TWO HOURS MORE TO SEE THE SUN
ITS DAYLIGHT NOW AND THE ROLL IS BLEEK
EVERYONE KNOWS TO TUNE IN NEXT WEEK
CAUSE WERE ALL MEMBERS OF THIS RELIGION
CALLED RAVE, AND WE KNOW FOR SURE OUR SOULS IT WONT SAVE
BUT ITS THAT AMAZING MUSIC THATS BROUGHT US TOGETHER AGAIN BATHING OURSELVES IN RECREATIONAL SIN.
NOW ITS BACK TO WORK TILL NEXT WEEK
EXCITED AND WAITING FOR OUR NEXT PEAK
"REHAB IS FOR QUITTERS"

 

[Angelight]

*claps hands*
very nice image

love
angela

 

[JD-G]

angela,
thanks for the reply its good to be able to express a feeling or event that you have had
through writing and better when someone reads it and relates/feels what their feeling
"REHAB IS FOR QUITTERS"

 

[Angelight]

Jd-g,
that it why i post in this place. Writing for me is such an important outlet in my life. Most of the people here in this forum really read into what you write. It is so great to hear feedback on people who actually feel what you are feeling. But your poem brought such a wonderful vision in my head. Thank you.
love
angela

 

[JD-G]

Angela,
its good to find an outlet of common
interest i look more forward to reading
posts here
jd
"RAHAB IS FOR QUITTERS"

 

[Angelight]

me too

 

[satori18]

i want to bump this back up....i think that it should be read...definetly, it was really engaging, thank you.
------------------
satori shalom

 

[bLueSunShiNe]

JD-G,
You have captured the true meaning of what it's like to be at a rave. I actually got a tear in my eye...anxious that I have to wait till Halloween for my next party. Keep up the good work!
~*~Much love and fuzzy hugs~*~
bLueSunShiNe~*~

 

[doodle bugg]

*stands up and applaudes*
~great poem!!~