Thoughts stream of raunchiness

[deficiT]

88 days with Lizzy on my side
and a fortnite tight with cold affairs
the warmth gets drowned out softly
Brightly shines the broken candelabra
Hissing, squeaking, sunken, dull
Riptide breaks, recedes in full

how many years till you break convention?
no more lies, no more attention
Telling myself to feel with others
No more sisters, no more brothers
yours is the spite that greases my gears
no more comforts, no more fears

 

[RareForm]

Telling myself to feel with others
No more sisters, no more brothers
yours is the spite that greases my gears
no more comforts, no more fears

This is whole piece is so good, but this really got me. Great stuff.

 

[deficiT]

This is whole piece is so good, but this really got me. Great stuff.

thanks! i wanted to put up a thread to post things that came to me, because I haven't really been writing recently and it's a bit of a bummer

 

[cduggles]

thanks! i wanted to put up a thread to post things that came to me, because I haven't really been writing recently and it's a bit of a bummer

I hope you keep posting your great work!

 

[deficiT]

emote at a pace preconceived
notions fill these oceans
elsewhere is a figment of sorrow
caved in, again i let you wallow
well are you done yet,
or should i again play a puppet?

you always left me alert in the morning
warnings i couldn't heed
these days i like a little sunlight when i read
and i take my time in the afternoon
to see whos face is on the other side
prettier than yours,

but still a shade i cannot see
oblivion only means, leave me be
i wouldn't run if i could stand on my own
crawling over and time will never be free
at least i can sift through the dirt,
of what you are and what you pretend to be

 

[cduggles]

These are my favorite lines:

emote at a pace preconceived

these days i like a little sunlight when i read

but still a shade i cannot see

at least i can sift through the dirt,
of what you are and what you pretend to be

 

[deficiT]

Everyone has such a big smile
But I can't play along or pretend
Sideways smiles from halfway friends
I wish I didn't bring me with me
I wish that this would end

Elation is a hammer that smites
And joy is a cold whipping post
Your summer shine daydreams
Make for good revelry
But your shoulders grow colder
When I need them the most

 

[cduggles]

Favorite lines;

Sideways smiles from halfway friends

Elation is a hammer that smites
And joy is a cold whipping post

 

[neversickanymore]

This is whole piece is so good, but this really got me. Great stuff.

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